Open Poetry #18 |
Remembering That Song |
Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
That song is playing again on the radio, The song that I never thought I’d hear. It takes me back to a time not long ago, When I held your heart to mine so dear. It played on and took me back to then, When all that mattered was you and I. I got so lost I couldn’t remember when, When it was that I finally said good-bye. And so, that song plays again in my heart, Finally telling me what went wrong. But, since I can’t get back again to start, I’ll always be remembering that song. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you! (sigh) May the beauty of love again come to you and have you singing that song with her forever and ever happily! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you deserve the greatest happiness always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-16-2002 03:25 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this takes me back to when I first started writing and the man who inspired it..a certain song always reminds me of him...This poem touches my heart. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Moonlight Romeo - I've also heard songs that bring back so many pleasent memories. A very nice write of them... BC |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
The realization that the gift of love is never lost, if treasured always, in one's heart. My compliments, Sir Romeo, on this excellent write. |
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poetryinmotion Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 61mass |
hi Moonlight Romeo. this is a great piece of work. i felt every word you wrote. i liked this poem very much. great job. well written. love Alice |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done Romeo! Enjoyed much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
There is always just THAT song isn't there? *sigh* Amazing, the power of music. Thanks for making me sigh, Sweet Romeo. You have a talent for it. MERRY CHRISTMAS, DARLINGS.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Music really tugs the heartstrings. A very nice write, Romeo, and I remember a few tunes that kept my heart throbbing over found love, and lost love. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is so sad. I can definately relate to this piece. Music and memories are powerful things. Great job! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Moonlight, Music can certainly take you on a journey of memories can't it. This tells the story so well. it is sad, and well written. floria |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Thank you wonderful poets, it's an honor to be read and thought well of by such wonderful people. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Hello there, Romeo. I am not certain how I missed this one. Unfortunately I have many songs that do this to me. LOL! Its enough to make a person not want to have a favorite song with someone. I often wonder if my love and I have one song or many. Oh well...I'm rambling when what I really meant to say is that this is sadly beautifully true. Written from your heart, Im sure. I am many. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
so true, have a song myself too that brings up sweet bitter memories. thanks for sharing this wonderful gem. Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Moonlight Romeo~ Songs have a way of doing that, taking us back to that one time....thanks for the memories.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-23-2002 08:04 PM).] |
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DayDreamer99 Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 72 |
Now That Is AWESOME i love it! hehe *hugs* Tifferz |
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