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Bazooka Bubble Gum |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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When the allure of the party is over and the plug on the jukebox is pulled don’t huddle by yourself in the corner like a cigarette butt or little Jack Horner Polish the tables and shine the floor spray with glade and pledge the door a new reflection of you in the mirror next to the poster of James Dean you adore Wash the grease from your hands smooth them with Oil of Olay smile to a new tune of tomorrow tip your hat and have a nice day don’t be a soda jerk the rest of your life pick yourself up when you’re down scrape the Bazooka bubble gum from beneath the fountain of your frown You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-23-2002 05:06 PM).] |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
hey this is Cool. A little different direction ~! I likes Victoria~! *S* |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Victoria, I love this, first of all I saw the title and bazooka is my favorite, or was, my grandson likes the improved new kind. then I read it through and It sounded more and more like me, I love James Dean, always have, and of course the old housework, with pledge. LOL nice write, floria Floria "learning, always learning." [This message has been edited by strbbux (01-23-2002 02:35 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh yeahhh, oil of olay...the best stuff there is! i used to love bazooka bubble gum but now I'm really into dentyne ice or winterfresh...the flavor lasts way longer hehe  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love the creativity behind this, this is soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Deep down the party has only started and may we embrace each new day with a smile clean and pure! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*lol* like it a lot....sweet Bazooka Bubble Gum, geesh some good ole memories coming up while reading. Yep reading with a bright smile on my face. Thanks for sharing Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ATOV..thank you glad you enjoyed.. now put some change in the jukebox and lets boggey ha  floria..oh yes the ole housework.. well i havent tried bazooka in a long time but i remember the gum under all the soda fountains when i was growing up..they were packed with it..ha rosepetal thank you hon..i like juicy fruit myself  ..noah..cutie pie..ha..thank you ..i thought you would like this one..hugss charisma.thank you so much..yes the soda fountains always bring back those amerian graffiti memories [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-23-2002 04:40 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This made me feel like I was there...cleaning and scrubbing that bubblegum off... Enjoyed...Thanx Vic. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Neat! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Victoria, Would you chew that? I am confused...  Fun write.[This message has been edited by Larry C (01-23-2002 07:07 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a wonderful, uplifting smile of a poem. Loved it! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ you really have the amazing ability for vivid words....I love this... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-23-2002 08:14 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Barry..how about a cherry soda? ha..dont forget to put some change in that jukebox thank you newell for reading ..one chocolate sundae coming right up ..mmmm... Larry..thanks larry.ill eat it until my jaws ache ha.not really..juicyfruit for me..how about a chocolate milkshake?..on the house Lauren..thanks lauren..your kitchen sink will be right up ha..in case you never heard of that..its a big big bunch of ice cream..ha. martie..thank you so much..let me fill that coke cola back up for you ha.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - delightful write. I always liked those cherry vanilla cokes... BC |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
...and when the quarters for the juke all run dry and one-time glory of teen passes us by when we finally find the young ewe in you its time to smile, yearbook closes and scrap the gum from our shoe your poem had a modern element of a.a.Milne in it, and pooh-esque aint bad, ya know ya know? *smiles* tsr |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Bill..thank you..and one cherry vanilla coming right up sir.. thanks SR..and poodle skirts aint bad ha..lets rock around the clock..but first let me make you a chocolate soda.. |
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