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Way Too Big!
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Way Too Big! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Way Too Big! By Larry Chadwick There he comes, he is too wide. How will he ever come on in? It’s been a problem for a while, I’m fairly certain it’s a sin. He has this problem getting in his car, Just can’t fit or cram him in. You’d think that he’d get over it, I’m fairly certain it’s a sin. We have had a chat, It did no good to talk to him. Unable to persuade, I’m fairly certain it’s a sin. So I give up on reaching him, I don’t know how he’ll get around. But it’s for certain he should regret, That his ego knows no bounds! January 22, 2002 [This message has been edited by Larry C (01-22-2002 02:45 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
There is just no talking to some people! I'm quite thick-headed at times! (hugs) E mail me, you're still my late-night owl buddy RP |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I thought you were making fun of a big fat guy.. I was gonna poke you.. giggle.. I know someone with a HUGE ego.. to bad it wasn't matched by his um... nevermind.. hehe Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) There are some people that can be so egotistical and it can only hurt them when they won't reach out to others in times of dire need; my heart goes out to them and pray they can open up and share their love to others and find hope and love in return! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so very well-expressed, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Lucie's reply! Yes, I think we all know at least one person like this Larry. Excellent write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Larry I must confess that the title of this one intrigued me and, of course, I knew you were talking about your ego before I started reading it!! lol This was great! Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ I hate it when I come across people that have no humor or dont like to talk...*L* great write here... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well now, I thought maybe you were talking about a dog!! I really did! You're right though, it is important to keep ones ego in proportion. Somehow it just doesn't look quite right when it gets too big! I'll bet you there are dogs out there with pretty big egos too. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy this is outstanding truly awesome. Much bigger than his ego I thought it was soooooooo good. Sometimes a poem speaks volumes this does. You obviously listen to yourself, and I’m listening to this poem it sings to me YOU really are an outstanding writer. No one ever writes like you do, YOU are superb Is this good? Does the earth spin in space and time? Do birds sing? Does the sea always touch the shore? Yes? Then YES this is utterly utterly fabulous As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Larry, I thought you were going to have to take someone to the gym and knock off about a hundred pounds or so....Now...you got me on that one...this was good...thanx.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAH got me too Larry, I was getting my reply ready in my head, saying I felt sorry for the poor lad. and then you sneak up on me with the last lines...well. I still feel sorry for him..nice poem. floria |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry - I also was taken in, until the end. Great write... BC |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Larry, looks like u got me too!!! I admit I was drawn in by the title... lmao A very witty write, thanks for sharing Pepper |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
My ego's through the top, yet I own a 2 seater. Go figure. Good one, Larry. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a terrific ending Larry! You had me raising an eyebrow for a moment there, followed quickly by a great big smile, lol. An excellent write indeed ... very much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
me too...was caught until the end *s M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
RosePetal, Night-owl friend...thanks. Lucie, Gotcha...how big? Hmmmm. Thanks. Noah, You are so right. Thanks. Nancy Lee, LOL Thanks. Sue, I knew I couldn't fool you! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, I'm with you! Thanks.BluesSerenade, LOL Possibly. But for sure on people. Mushy, I can always count on you...Thanks! Magnus, Not that it wouldn't work, eh? Thanks. floria, Yeah, I suppose we should. Thanks. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, Not you...tell me ain't so! Thanks. Peppermint35, Gotcha...lol. Thanks. Duncan, At least you have enough room. LOL Thanks. Kit, Really? Wow...Thanks. Wynter, Oops...lol. Thanks. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Larry, you mean all this time you were talking about my EGO! I thought is was...nevermind Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kethry, Not yours! Hey...thanks. |
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