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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-01-22 10:49 AM



Would you like to meditate together?
Deeply in solace of our minds
listen to secrets of echoing waves
in exotic saunas of salt and sands
taste particles of salt upon moistened lips
pearly sands flowing through bare fingertips
as we inhale the essence of the night

Feel liquid moonlight ooze slowly over skin
relishing in our passionate waterfall
listen to hypnotic chants of feathered wings
alluring zephyrs in winds, seducing
whispering like effervescence red wine
upon the brim of love’s afterglow
come meditate, let sweet sensations flow






You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy



[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-22-2002 01:19 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-01-22 10:59 AM


enjoyed..I haven't learned how to meditate yet, though..

hugss
M

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2 posted 2002-01-22 11:28 AM


~V~

sounds like a nice place to be....

Lauren~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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(smiles) Soooooooo beautifully sensual and romantic, sweet friend, may you forever share bliss and your dreams with the love of your life always and meditate with peace-of-mind! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-22 12:03 PM


Beautiful words, Victoria...
I wish I could meditate like that
I also wish I could write like that.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-01-22 01:22 PM


thank you Maureen..hugss

Lauren..thank you for peeking in today hugss

Noah..thank you sweet one hugss

Madame..well you certainly can...love your poems hugs

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6 posted 2002-01-22 01:57 PM


The scenes you paint are exquisitly done~! meditation never sounded so gooooood~!


*S*

Atov

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7 posted 2002-01-22 02:06 PM


Victoria~I love to meditate, and I love this piece! Well done.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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8 posted 2002-01-22 06:06 PM


thank you ATOV...thanks for peeking in today..hugss

Nancy..im glad you enjoyed my words hon

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9 posted 2002-01-22 07:12 PM



Each word...a sequin of desire, lit by the amorous glow of a poetess heart.

Robert Joseph

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10 posted 2002-01-22 07:35 PM


Beautiful words Victoria. Nice idea asking him to meditate and spend quiet time together, People watch too much tv now days. this is very nice. floria
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11 posted 2002-01-22 08:00 PM


Robert..thank you for your lovely response..and for peeking in tonight..

                 ~Victoria~


You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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12 posted 2002-01-22 08:01 PM


Oh good idea Victoria!!! I like this very much indeed

It flows.. in quiet symmetry

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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13 posted 2002-01-22 08:05 PM


Vic...this is reallllllly good...YES it is..
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14 posted 2002-01-22 08:11 PM


thank you floria..im taking volunteers ha..

thank you pepper..nice of you to pop in girl..good hearing from you hugss

thank you Barry..im so glad you enjoyed my sauna

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15 posted 2002-01-24 02:29 AM


I think so...James
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16 posted 2002-01-24 08:48 AM


Sounds great, now if you can actually get a male to meditate you have accomplshed something rather special
Sandra

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