Open Poetry #18 |
- God Makes Anything Possible - Double Tanka |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
God Makes Anything Possible Double Tanka At the yawn of time the sun wore a somber robe until the Lord danced Luna fell in love with day and it's blaze became golden ~ In the hush of breeze you can hear God paint the sun many shades of smiles everything is possible even rainbows can be touched By Melissa P. Monette |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
he sure does and I'm living proof! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Definitely! God makes everything possible! This is so true and pretty Melissa RP |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* magnificent...Yes, He, surely does...how stunning His handiwork is. **big hugs** You have said it with a beauty that does justice to the talent He gifted you with. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (01-24-2002 11:14 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Melissa, God does make everything possible. I am living proof, too. In a bothched open heart surgery thirty one years ago the doctors said to pray that I would die. I didn't! Still here to haunt them. Bypass? It closed up but God grew a collateral artery. Doctors can't do that yet. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"you can hear God paint the sun"...how good is THAT??? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How good was that entire sequence of words! Melissa that was fantastic, and I saved that one in the Tanka Hall of Fame! Beautifully done. ~* CARPE' DIEM *~ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
How magnificent is our God! You have written these so beautifully, dear Melissa. Hugs Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet Melissa, He can do anything, and He always creates the most beautiful masterpieces for all to behold and cherish! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always so breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
So very true!Well done! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful tankas, and it fits the awesome picture very well. enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, Beautiful contemplation of the awesomeness and beauty of the creation of our GOD. Well Done! Dennis :^) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely tankas indeed melissa ..hugs..nicely done ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Luna fell in love with day and it's blaze became golden ~ In the hush of breeze you can hear God paint the sun many shades of smiles ====================================== Your imagery is divine Melis...you can keep your monopoly money LOL... cuz I do love this beautiful Queen of Tanka I'm like a broken record that you can play ... |
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