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Just Before Dawn
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Just Before Dawn |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Just before dawn... it is the time when the cloak of darkness lay like a thick blanket attempting to smother the soon approaching rays of dawn’s light It is the time of silence... when only your thoughts penetrate the minutes that tick by and are soon to leave this glorious peace behind The world is still and quiet... your day is not awake yet, and not for hours will the wheels roll with humanity’s noise bombarding the space we call everyday life It is right now... and for a few splendid moments you have time to listen to the night bird’s serenade to feel the ancient beat of life in your soul, forming the symphony that is you It is all there, waiting in the darkness that is Just before dawn... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (01-23-2002 11:48 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...my favorite time of the day--BEDTIME!  But truly I do love it, the world is so still and quiet then--thanks for capturing that moment for me in poetry!Well done, sunnyone! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  Ooohhhhhhhh...oh Sunnyone, we've all missed you soooooooo much, it's so great to see you again, this is gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) I love the morning, especially right when the sun is about to go up, so I can see the colors of the new day! We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are sunshine to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
It is all there, waiting in the darkness that is Just before dawn... Love your twilight words Sunny..as always.. ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny: Sure did miss you and your beautiful words. The quiet of the morning is the best and you have read all of our thoughts. Keep writing - waiting for the next one. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
to feel the ancient beat of life in your soul, forming the symphony that is you Sunnyone - this is a beautiful piece. I really enjoyed reading. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. [This message has been edited by Nightshade (01-23-2002 01:11 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful expression...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunnyone, I like the way you write. Enjoyed |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sunny, This is a MOST excellent write. I love that time just before dawn and the rush, rush, rush of the day begins. It's so nice to see you posting again. *hugs* my friend Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~It is all there, waiting in the darkness that is Just before dawn...~ beautiful penned, simply beautiful!!!! love it a lot ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunnyone~ It is the time of silence....yes, indeed sometimes I love the sound of complete silence....beautiful... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
My favorite time used to be midnight, but yes, I believe it is just before dawn which is why this caught my eye, that and I was so glad to see you again! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like a happy woman, lying there, appreciating life. Sandra |
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