Open Poetry #18 |
Love Drug (repost from Open 15) |
RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Last night you told me about a drug Four letters, it's called love I realized It's got me hooked And I can't get enough Your right, no matter how much you have You always want more An ongoing dependency of your love drug It's what I'm feinin for When you give it to me I feel as though I can fly No need for stimulants Your symptoms give the best kind of high I can't settle for any other drug Since none come close I can indulge in your love drug all day Without worrying about overdose Your side effects feel incredibly good They never wear off This drug has to be earned It cannot be bought Therefore, love drug has no street value So you won't find it on a price list If your lucky enough to obtain some Treasure it, for it is priceless What else can it do? It can make you the happiest person alive Or it could slowly kill you Eating at you inside If it gets a hold of you You might do things you normally wouldnt do It can discard your inhibitions and make you try something new I don't need rehab I love the cravings I get for you Be careful, this drug can harm people It has no warning label Though it is not illegal I can't stop at one dose Still can't stop at two This is the love drug that has me addicted to you |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
i like this one good job hun. i loved this part What else can it do? It can make you the happiest person alive Or it could slowly kill you Eating at you inside i know this pain allllll to well. and know that high allllll to well. nice work. *hugs* love ya jesse So tonight I'll ask |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(KISS ON LIPS) Ooohhhhhhh...I love it, I love it, sweet friend, your love is always such an addiction to me, I can't tell you how many times to say I LOVE YOU!!! (kiss on lips) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love you sooooooo much! (kisses) You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
love drugs..we have our own endorphins so why bother with the substitutes..charming words |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* oh how true it is....Love is truly the Drug of choice... at least it is for me...Well done...I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
RosePetal - whom ever this is for, how can he resist these words? Wish you well... BC |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh rose petal,, now this is the only drug I approve of. Lots and lots of it. great write. Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this is a wonderful write Joanna..loved it..love is addicting isnt it?..enjoyed ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh Joanna this is so beautifully written. ANd you are 100% correct, it is a drug, a drug which can kill, and also a drug to bring happiness. Whichever the case, love is a very addictive drug, as many of us know. Great job Joanna, I lovedd it. From your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Joanna~ It is a drug, and no matter how we sometimes try....it always pulls us back....thanks for the repost, so glad I got to read this... hugs Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-23-2002 07:55 PM).] |
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DayDreamer99 Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 72 |
such a true poem Love the best kind of drug I can't stop at one dose Still can't stop at two This is the love drug that has me addicted to you Thats mah favorite part Tifferz *huggs* |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
How true! Love is a major drug! The higs and lows are as real as that from any illegal substance. Excellent writing! Love, Bonnie |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thank you to everyone who replied! I reposted this because the first time around it was only read by three people Glad it brought enjoyment to you all. love, RosePetal |
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