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Conundrum |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Conundrum In weary slouch and teary sigh I sit my couch with bleary eye And pray to moments passing through What in the world am I to do? A thousand mile away she stir A distant Isle, in distant blur That holds my world in hypnotize A butterfly would proselytize. She lives within a foreign core A prisoner of a bond of law Playing a ghost in severance Within a gardens reverence Whispering within the breeze Vicarious in subtle tease Weaving webs of ecstasy Threads of love and fantasy A butterfly of waltz and hue A conundrum of false and true |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"playing a ghost"....some say my home is haunted...I am beginning to believe it is so. *s Distance whether close or not is still too far away for me. I always love to read you in the morning *s Maureen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thank you dear, but I am going on a cruise tomorrow and will be gone at least eleven days.  till I get back. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
but with your words you set her free and she will fly to be where she is suppose to be |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dry thy eye ... please don't cry hear the sigh of not so distant butterfly. Question not the rue of false or true ... view instead love's hue hidden inside of you. It matters not the distance in-between one can still touch serene and not be seen. One only need believe for the dream to begin its been said before ... and shall be said again ... You are there ... yet here with me to fly free ... we need only to just be.   *winkiewinkie*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Who can resist the wiles of thee. I am hopelessly lost in your fantasy. I don't think I could find my way back even if I tried. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Slick, That would be nice. Thank you. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (01-23-2002 03:16 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What DON'T I like about this? Absolutely nothing. It is perfect in and of itself... So for that, you get a this  and this  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"'A butterfly of waltz and hue A conundrum of false and true" Oh such beautiful words you weave symour. Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, And for that you get two Floria, And it is I cought in my own web. Thank you, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
11 days?????  What are we gonna do with out your rhymes for 11 days???!!!???? I guess we will just have to play in the archives  Come back to us tanned, rested and well inspired me Stinkylove... we will miss you and Randys kisses LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thanks for the push. Tomorrow I'll put up the clear of mist, it's similar to this poem but a litle different. But then again you know how I feel about butterflies. WW R S |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Seymour, you always write such touching and flowing word...Your rhyme is awesome and your poetry is very visual...I enjoy it. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
like it, love it......and enjoyed it. and you going on a cruise.....that sounds marvelous to me, wish you wonderful days and hope to see wonderful descriptions from your trip when you are back. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Thank you for a wonderful reply. Chrisma, I'll try and thank you for the read. *L* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy-- I know the tune you play a sigh for Sy I give today You may not fly like butterfly wile but you write your heart with so much style Have fun on your cruise! [This message has been edited by Martie (01-23-2002 06:44 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you and a till I get back. |
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