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Vacuity
Junior Member

since 2002-01-22

Posts 12

0 posted 2002-01-22 10:18 PM

Shadows linger from darkened pasts,
Tears always glistening in her eyes
A fair face in the looking glass,
Seeking the truth in your vengeful lies
Sweet and innocent her smile may seem,
But her heart is frozen in time
Memories provoke waking dreams,
She laughs and cries, "Now you are mine."

I figured I'd start with my latest and work my way back? I'm a new user, so...yeah. :P

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-01-22 10:23 PM

A nice start..welcome to Passions...

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-01-22 10:30 PM

Very nice, I like it, the pic really makes it better

Welcome to passions! Please check your email for a special greeting.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-22 11:00 PM

Claire, welcome, you certainly have my attention

edit: oh, and how did you get the pic to the side? If you don't mind sharing !

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (01-22-2002 11:01 PM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-01-22 11:02 PM

But her heart is frozen in time
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Welcome to Poetry Land...
many lovely images in this mystic write.
very cool pic...did you draw it?
Nice to have you here with us, I look forward to more of your work.
take care
jm

I'm like a broken record that you can play ...
Repeating (as if it matters) ... everything I say.

Gin Blossoms

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-22 11:05 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS, CLAIRE!

Very nice first post!
I shall look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-01-22 11:13 PM

*sigh* WOW!!!What an introduction...I absolutely love this poem. Welcome to Passions...it is going to be such a pleasure to read more of your poems. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2002-01-22 11:16 PM

There’s something haunting about this piece. Maybe it’s the picture in combination with the words. It reminded me of the myth of Lorelie. Welcome to passions.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-01-22 11:19 PM

What a great entrance to Passions! Welcome. I like this, it is quite magical, and very nicely presented.

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