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A Cheyenne Moon
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A Cheyenne Moon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Warrior clouds dance in tribal skies indigo spirits awaken ebony smoke signals and feathered headdress of stars dance across the forefathers of a Cheyenne moon Pine trees bow to regal mountains worshiping below upon reservations as moccasin winds blow Warriors in Buffalo robes shuffle their feet to buckskin tom toms ceremonial drums beat Wingspans of an eagle shadow dances with maidens in the moon celebrating raindrops upon a papoose cheek You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-22-2002 06:23 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, Interesting read, Enjoyed. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
love those warriors, Victoria,  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo spiritually soothing, sweet friend, I can hear the drums beat and fires sing and warriors dance to your wonderful surreal words! (kiss on cheek) T%his is gorgeous, sweet friend, you truly are a queen of imagery to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Wingspans of an eagle shadow dances with maidens in the moon celebrating raindrops upon a papoose cheek ~~ I LOVE this....wow ~V~ so gentle and soft... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-22-2002 05:05 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ I simply love this write~ 'as moccasin winds blow' Such an original thought ! GREATLY enjoyed~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it..I think you and OWG could write a wonderful duet of his travels ...reminds me of some of his rides. hugss M |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
anything of this tone I like, especially when written by you my friend. too cool~! *S* Atov |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sy Thank you kind sir kathleen..ha.. me too hugss Chief Noah..hey there guy..glad you enjoyed  Lauren..thank you so much..appreciate your kind words hugs Marge..Thank you Marge ..so glad you liked..hows your warrior?  M..he would look cute in JUST a headress  ATOV..thank you..you would be a lovely indian princess with your long black hair |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
You took me there Victoria...the imagery and intensity of this poem had me THERE!!!!If I could dance, I would have joined in...You have painted a beautiful picture with this poem!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vic...you and Ivy Rose have both captivated me with the lore of the native americans.. thank you.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Victoria, this is the second lovely Native American poem I have read tonight. this is wonderful. floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Floria..thank you..i enjoyed writing the poem..glad you enjoyed too Thank you Brian..nice of you to say..im happy you enjoyed Barry...thank you so much..yes i told her must be sharing the same muse today |
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