Open Poetry #18 |
Dusk in the Desert |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dusk in the Desert Dusk in the desert where quietness lies Indigo blue under lavender skies Young Golden Eagle in breeze of the night Last beams of sunlight on wings tipped in white Sun slowly drifts now beyond mountain’s ledge Bright golden beams fanning out from the edge Canyon is silent, the heavens are strewn With bright little stars and a glorious moon Skies light the footpath of silvery sand That changes at dawn to the color of tan And morning will also bring joy to the eyes Mountains of purple beneath crimson skies So very few flowers, yet beauty unfurled In this ever surprisingl and colorful world I walked in the desert, alone in the sand God stood there beside me with paintbrush in hand Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (01-22-2002 07:18 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh that last line,, I am speechless, soooo sooo touching, I pictured you there, with God next to you, and He holding a paintbrush. floria |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...and you, my dear, are one of His most colorful brushes! This is soooooo beautiful, Elizabeth! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo enchanting, sweet friend, I love the desert so much; the colors are always so breathtaking and such serenity and beauty always fills me when I rest on the plateaus! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you paint such wonderful colors with your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We ARE fortunate to live in such a beautiful world, if we only took the time to see it... thank you for this jewel... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Elizabeth, this is a work of art in itself and an awakening!!! To read such beauty, described with such beauty Hugz, Pepper |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Liz...yet another masterpiece of your poetry that graces our eyes... |
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