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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Let me undo what has to be undone Slowly making sure that no one gets hurt But if someone does make sure it's me so that I never forget how much love hurts |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, I hope this isn't a recent feeling you've been experiencing, for this is so sad and I have seen love come undone before ever so much and it makes me saddened to feel that! (kiss on cheek) May true love forever tie knots of eternity in your heart and fill you with joy! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
walker, none of us will ever forget how the pain of lost love feels. Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Not likely to forget, either the pain or the pleasure. Great write, walker, I really liked this! |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Wouldn't it be nice to have that kind of control of the pain. Most of the time, we're not prepared and the love becomes undone before we're aware. I enjoyed your poetry. Cheryl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is hard to undo love completely, seems there is always something there to remind us. I was moved by your words and the unselfish act of absorbing the hurt and simply letting go. A painful poem, yet so very nicely written. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now Walker...don't you go and let that happen to you!! Well expressed... |
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