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walker
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0 posted 2002-01-21 01:45 PM



Let me
undo
what has to be undone
Slowly
making sure
that no one gets hurt
But if someone
does make sure
it's me
so that I never forget
how much
love hurts

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-21 01:54 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, I hope this isn't a recent feeling you've been experiencing, for this is so sad and I have seen love come undone before ever so much and it makes me saddened to feel that! (kiss on cheek) May true love forever tie knots of eternity in your heart and fill you with joy! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-21 02:21 PM


walker, none of us will ever forget how the pain of lost love feels. Well done. Chris

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Duncan
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3 posted 2002-01-21 02:27 PM


Not likely to forget, either the pain or the pleasure.  Great write, walker, I really liked this!
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4 posted 2002-01-21 02:28 PM


Wouldn't it be nice to have that kind of control of the pain. Most of the time, we're not prepared and the love becomes undone before we're aware. I enjoyed your poetry. Cheryl
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5 posted 2002-01-22 08:08 PM


It is hard to undo love completely, seems there is always something there to remind us.  

I was moved by your words and the unselfish act of absorbing the hurt and simply letting go.  A painful poem, yet so very nicely written.

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6 posted 2002-01-22 08:15 PM


Now Walker...don't you go and let that
happen to you!!   Well expressed...

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