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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2002-01-20 09:18 AM

i have fallen in love with you--
          many times
over
     and
          over...
i have held you
     many times
          in my mind
entangled in you--
i have touched you
     with my hands
caressing each line
of your face
     tempting your lips
          with feathered kiss
               watching you smile
                    beneath my touch...
i have smiled
          beyond my tears
     believing in you...
i have needed you
     with the taking of my breath
          when you lay the words
          in front of me
clad only in their nakedness
     their simplicity
          with no if's
          with no and's
          with no second thoughts...
i have loved you
     with all of me
          giving more
               than i meant to give
because
     i have trusted you
over
     and
          over...
i love you
               today
i have loved you
          in the yesterday
tomorrow
i will love you
                    still...

-dgvarner
01-20-02

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (01-21-2002 10:54 AM).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-20 09:57 AM

wonderful poem of love and trust.....some lovely thoughts here.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-01-20 10:09 AM

Dee darling girl I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly dreamy a fabulous little write with layers of meaning again. YOUR writing lately is superb darling girl just superb

I love the depth of this the shades of it’s meanings, truly wonderful writing and (((((((Hug’s))))))))) to stave off the cold and lonely feelings

Love and warm stuff
As always
Bubbles

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

CondorSey
Junior Member

since 2001-12-24

Posts 28
Dam-Nation

3 posted 2002-01-20 10:33 AM

You've nicely stated the way that true love should feel.

Let's put the FUN back into Dysfunctional.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-01-20 05:46 PM

This is beautiful. Such a strong love flows through your words.
Sandra

Mac Attack
Member

since 2001-12-12

Posts 100
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2002-01-20 05:59 PM

Very nicely done! Love must be in the air, this is similar in theme to a post I did last night now called "Cupids Fool". Nice to see I'm not alone!

Cheers!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-01-20 06:48 PM

DG~
ABSOLUTELY STUNNINGLY LOVELY~
*sighs felt here*
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-01-20 11:32 PM

DV...this is absolutely beautiful and it is also the way love should be felt.
This is how I feel about my husband. I fall in love with him over and over again, day after day. I am glad that you have someone special like that too!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-01-20 11:41 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your beautiful words of love touch all our hearts like feathers and have us sigh! (kiss on cheek) May true love forever touch your heart and shine with timeless beauty! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2002-01-20 11:41 PM

Love and trust go hand in hand and you have said it beautifully. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

10 posted 2002-01-21 12:02 PM

dgvarner...This is EXCEPTIONAL poetry. Very well-crafted and stunningly beautiful.

***Ivy Rose

rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

11 posted 2002-01-21 02:09 AM

Beautifully done write! Captured the moment of complete trust of two lovers. Thanks for sharing
-R

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-01-21 02:17 AM

May I keep this? It is absolutely beautiful, and flows so smoothly. I think it's my fave of yours now.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2002-01-21 02:23 AM

Beautiful expression of your love...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-01-21 03:18 PM

If I ever wanted to see words written to me
about how I was loved...I think it would be
this poem...Beautiful DG...

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

15 posted 2002-01-21 11:36 PM

wow! i'm way behind...
KATHLEEN, BUBBLES, CONDORSEY, SANDRA, MAC (i'm gonna look for that poem, mac!), LYRA, NOAH, STARTIME, IVY, REBEKAH, MIDNITE (yes..you may 'keep' it

..), MAGNUS (very sweet what you said..

).........
THANK YOU!! i appreciate your replies so very much..!! please forgive my 'generic' response back to you...

time is short today...but i wanted to say thank you!!

i'm so glad youre reading!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

16 posted 2002-01-23 02:24 AM

This just has so much emotion. Something I seem to be open to of late.

Walls are broken down with these words and the feeling shine in the dust.

Thank you for writing sweets.

Parker

[This message has been edited by Parker (01-23-2002 01:11 PM).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

17 posted 2002-01-23 02:58 AM

Who gave you a key to my mind tonight? Is ok...this poem is most welcomed.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

18 posted 2002-01-23 08:44 AM

wow, a peeping tom right here in passions.

you have looked in my heart and taken whats there
to place in your own lovely words.

very nice write.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

19 posted 2002-01-23 10:30 PM

What a beautiful love story this is. Love is such a wonderful feeling and you have expressed it with great beauty. You’ve touched me with this one

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

20 posted 2002-01-24 05:45 AM

Wow! Off to the library with this one!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

21 posted 2002-01-24 08:11 AM

PARKER..dust walls are hard to hide behind, eh?...

dont thank me..i should be thanking you..for inspiring me...

DUNCAN..i like to trip thru your mind..heh heh..it seems to be a lot like mine lately! glad you enjoyed..
A WHISPER'S..and your heart too eh? lol..we all seem to be in love with love these days..

thanks for reading!
TRACY..good to hear from you and DUNCAN..lol you are a good team it seems..

thanks for reading..
EAGLE..love to dwell in your library.. ! thanks!

hugs, g

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