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ensnared...in the blue (duet with parker)
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ensnared...in the blue (duet with parker) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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gently... she moves her hands across her keyboard her link to him-- involuntary action of her need to feel him on her skin hoping groping quietly for something she may touch... closing her eyes she can see him feel him her fingertips longing-- but never reaching him... softly... he touches the screen fingertips wanting aching aching to caress his whole being trying to reach desperate desperate for just this... he whispers it to her typing it willing it wishing she could know wishing she could feel wishing she could ache... oh...but she does ache for him... ...surely we two have touched-- our hearts ensnared in the blue entangled in the space caught up in each other trapped in desire want yearning perpetual needful ache... our souls... have touched love -james parker haley/dgvarner 01-20-02 ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ [he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel [This message has been edited by dgvarner (01-22-2002 08:32 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! STANDING OVATION!!! Ooohhhhh...you two did such a wonderful job, sweet friends, this is such a beautiful poem of finding love from far away and of destiny of reaching one another through the space between modems! (big hugggssssss) I know just how you feel, for I am in love with the most beautiful girl I could ever dream of, and she lives far away with me, but yet our love is sooooooo wonderful and we dream of meeting one another soon! (smiles) This is a gorgeous duet, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet friends, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
trapped in desire want yearning perpetual needful ache... can't disagree at all with this write...*s nicely done, you two Maureen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Blended nicely...i could feel the yearning ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a very in depth look at trying to free our expression of love and passion through something that invariably.....is sometimes a trap. I really got a LOT out of this one. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee darling girl and Parker darling boy I suppose you think that I’m going to praise you to the skies? Hmmm? …….. Well, of course I am, this is utterly utterly wonderful as YOU BOTH very well know. This is really fabulous writing sometimes when you don’t expect it showers of moonbeams descend on you. They dropped like little twinkles of delight when I read this. Oh my eyes they are refreshed and my soul is washed in joy this is sooooooooo beautiful. Absolutely first class writing I could feel the yearning and the wanting, truly outstanding writing And I always mean what I say, if you don't believe me Parker ask Dee she'll tell you  Love and warm stuff As always Bubbles  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* WOW!!!! Oh gosh the feelings are so strong here and you both tell the perfectly...This is a wonderful duet...**big hugs** More please.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
whew! what a poem! This was great you two! I could feel the longing in this one! Love it! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG&Parker~ Electric ! ! ! ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
 ...i think they like us, love.. ..hey you poet friendly type people....thanks a bunch..!! i find that the feelings are easily there...but putting them in a blended word form..hmm..that didnt come as easy...! what do say parker? it was fun hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is wonderful you two. An excellent display of two talented poets putting their heads together. You are both to be applauded!!!  Gail, congradulations...James doesn't do a duet with just anyone you know.   Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
...surely we two have touched-- our hearts ensnared in the blue entangled in the space caught up in each other trapped in desire want yearning perpetual needful ache... our souls... have touched love =================================== Well this is a moth anthem and Im loving it very very nice write you two...love the burning intensity of this...you have captured well the ache that distance creates...sometimes I dont know whether we should cut the cords off these damn things or crawl on our lips thru them LOL but hey...thats what chapstick and singe proof mascara is for Heres hoping that the distances close and you can quench that ache... I do so enjoy when poets minds entwine and they write a happy ending. please do -- duet us some more I'm like a broken record that you can play ... Repeating (as if it matters) ... everything I say. Gin Blossoms [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (01-22-2002 06:17 PM).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MARINA..i do feel honored to have had the priviledge and i didnt give him an easy beginning either--free verse..lolJANETMARIE..i say we'll have to crawl on our lips..cause doggonit i'm not pulling the cord--then he'll be gone!! lol thanks for reading.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
“Souls touching love”, yes, what a wonderful feeling. This is truly one of the best duets I have seen on these pages. It touched me with its ache and longing. I sure hope you’ll duet some more If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks everybody for your replies. These duets can be fun to do, and thanks dg-sweets for putting up with me in this process. Parker |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
...surely we two have touched-- our hearts ensnared in the blue entangled in the space caught up in each other trapped in desire want yearning perpetual needful ache... our souls... have touched love Tracey told me about this post. Aside from any personal interest, this is one of the finest writes I've read here at PIP. I sincerely compliment you both. All the more impressive, given that it was a collaboration. Damn, I wish I could think of a response even close to equaling the poem. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Duncan, thank you. dg was the mastermind I just followed her lead. She has a nice rhythm that I could follow. Parker [This message has been edited by Parker (01-24-2002 12:28 PM).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
TRACEY..truly too kind of you! glad you enjoyed.. (and thanks for sending DUNCAN!)PARKER..putting up with you is a pleasure my love.. thanks for taking the job to write with me!!DUNCAN..glad you followed T to our little ditty thank you much for the gracious reply!hugs, g |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
When I read both your names I know that it must be good......and see I was right....this was an incredible duet. love it.....every line and the presentation was also great. Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh you two!! This write just blew me away! Incredible ache and longing here. Very very well done you two! You must du-et again soon for us ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Charisma, thank you very much, we enjoyed it. Enchantress, thank you, I've always thought I'd like to du-et with dg... maybe again. Parker |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I can feel love's hunger flowing through the blue of this screen as two hearts express such a need...Nicely done to the two of you.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg & Parker- What can I say...this is wonderful. You two really do make a great team, and I'm glad you got to du-et right here in the blue pages.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
achingly beautiful, good job both of you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MAGNUS..if you can feel 'loves hunger'..then we have succeeded in writing well together.. thank you friend..vicky..is good to see YOU back in the blue my friend.. thanks..KETHRY..thank you a bunch! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot one of your best |
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