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Broken Embers
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Broken Embers |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Broken Embers Passions played but soon forgot dancing flames that fed and fought and in its mist, all a glow broken embers ... that would show Natural ... who would have thought that such desire burns to hot Crackling heat of hearts that wood broken embers ... understood Crumbling ... falling apart left behind its burning heart soon to die as sparks are tossed broken embers ... a love lost |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
awwww you tore my heart apart with this one....heres to brighter days and happy times....Peace to you, HUGS....  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-03-2002 12:19 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Why must the heat burn so hot, only to have the embers smolder and die. If not for the warmth then why build the fire? 'tis a mystery to me!! I enjoy your emotion that you put into your poetry. Happy New Year Ctowen~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Yet another wonderful piece of writing you have given us. This was outstanding and very much enjoyed by this reader. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such emotion in this poem....you always pour out your heart and leave me sighing when I read your work...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Lauren - Didn't mean to tear you up ... but I will settle for your hugs and the warm blanket of peace any day! BS - The object is to keep the embers burning ... some relationships seem to run out of this fuel well before starting ... I share your thoughts, "why start?" I guess the spark has to go somewhere. Sue - Thank you for reading and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed. Please take care as well. Karen - My heart needs overflow somewhere ... I am glad that it can atleast be shared. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ahh craig! Such emotion flowing throughout this! ((warm hugs)) I have missed you on here sweety! RP |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my, this is so much the way I feel about life, and the way things burn out, so often on one side before the other.  Sandra |
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