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Striptease
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Striptease |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Branches of tress shed leaves. The adulteress, autumn hangs up the sign "we're open, Come in, please. Striptease." The playful breeze won't cease. It spins in whirl-winds. Shed the curtains. foliage up to the knees -- striptease. Dance so as not to freeze! Do as you please. In the golden gardens, throw aside your garments. It's the season's caprice, striptease. Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master [This message has been edited by Master (01-03-2002 11:15 PM).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
heh heh heh.. gottta love them hooters |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Oh! What a title tease this is, but a delightful find!!! Great work and metaphor play. Enjoyed... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Master~ This is just delightfully lovely~ How uniquely phrased~ Happy New Year to you, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
The title was definetly enticing, (Do I have to moderate?  ) LOL, but I was pleasantly surprised. Excellent poem! I loved the playful and joyous tone you gave to autumn when often it is depicted as rather depressing. I enjoyed this peace muchly, "Dance so as not to freeze!" I should take that to heart  "A hard, cold wisom is required for goodness to accomplish good. Goodness without wisdom always accomplishes evil" - Robert Heinlein |
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