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Passion Potion
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Passion Potion |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Sweet love, your eyes entrance me, holding me prisoner in the blue cells of your iris. Each touch, every caress, leaves me hot with fever, my skin burning where your fingers have tread. Fiery trails sweep me from head to toe, and gentle kisses only seem to fuel an already raging fire. Heated by desire's swelter, I pool in passion's cauldron. Stir me, melt me, pour my love into your essence, blending our selves until we are one scent -- a mingling fragrance heady with blissful beauty. Breathe deeply, inhaling emotions like perfume, sweet intoxication tickling senses, tantalizing liquid sex delightfully teasing every nerve. Bottle up this potent potion, cork the top and put it away. It doesn't matter ... we carry the richness of it on our flesh as it lingers from our together times, resounding with each pulsing heartbeat, growing stronger the closer we become. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
DAChelle, Hot...hot...hot! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
now wonder you have that little devil logo, I need a cold shower after this one, old..its HOT. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
An absolutely superb poem, Chelle... Please send me some of that potion!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DarkAngel, Well I have the notion, but not the potion. Very sexy write. LOL |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Chelle, you're on fire with your poetry. Could cause a computer meltdown for some of your male readers. I enjoyed this very much. It's passionate but tastefully done. Cheryl |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Thanks, everyone, for replying  .Larry - I get three "hot"s? Woohoo! ecrivan - Yup, I've been told that the little devil logo is quite appropriate for me. But I don't think so. I am TOTALLY sweet and innocent ... uh huh, that's it ... Lyra - I'll send you some potion right away! Do you think it'd sell well if I did infomercials?  Seymour - LOL. I'll send you a bottle as well. Everyone should have their own passion potion.  Cheryl - Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I hope that it doesn't cause a meltdown. I just got my computer back online, and I'm kind of enjoying myself  .~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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