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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
yesterday colors just a blend of morning and night with streetlight buttons some missing others ready to fall to dark street empty the siren talks to dog bark voices telling them how dead men sleep under the ground with their spirit wallets empty of soul I hear the dogs play howl fret songs with their toe click picking of sidewalk guitars out of tuned to derge by acne brick hands of alleys where trashcans hold mostly memories ©OWG (before dawn in nowhere town) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!This did bring back memories...How very interesting that with just a few words you could trigger such memories. I really like this poem. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Intense stuff OWG, the images so stirring. Again, I am stunned by your incredible writing talents...*s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
Startime, Thank you for the read and comments, I appreciate you. GS, you blush me babe....just one of those wake up in nowhere places...I spend lotsa time there it seems...must be the medication. thanx for the read lady.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lmao hon. If it's the medication then maybe I can get mine changed to match yours then MAYBE I can write like this. your to much sweets. See ya! (And I really don't believe to much can blush you....now just why can't I believe that one. *w* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-21-2002 02:10 PM).] |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
OWG~ just a blend of morning and night.....you blend your words nicely...and I love the paintings..... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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