Open Poetry #18 |
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Time |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan ![]() |
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we continue to live our daily plight as day after day, our lives turn and twist with time in the background, clouds against mist as mankind endures it's timeless pain our wallpaper sky, turns clouds into rain time stands still as mankind evolves on life's carousel, our fate revolves mere actors are we, on life's infinite stage in the book of forever, but one tiny page but the clock keeps on ticking and time has no end a concept too vast to comprehend time is an infinite mobius strip no end, no beginning, our lives just one blip on this endless screen, our lives unfold with time as our backdrop, history unrolls when human existence meets the end of time it loops back around and begins to re-wind |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
"mere actors are we, on life's infinite stage in the book of forever, but one tiny page" Lyra - So true. I truly enjoyed this pensive poem. So well thought out, and so very good. I, of course, will take up a million pages before my life comes to an end. And by the way, NY pizza is timeless. ![]() ![]() Dave |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lyra~ 'in the book of forever, but one tiny page' Ohhhhhhh, but what a poetic page it is~ Poet's are like that ... yeah, we are~ ![]() A lovely write sweet lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Sooooooooo true and well-said, sweet friend, time will always continue to revolve around us, but our love and destinies will go on, and as long as we stand our ground, time will be a companion to us all! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always so compelling and a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
WOW "as mankind endures it's timeless pain our wallpaper sky, turns clouds into rain" Just love your words here Madame, great poem. floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for your reply, Dave...and I sincerely wish you a life of millions of pages....now about that NY pizza.. ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for the reply and the hugs, Marge ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for your enthusiastic reply, Noah...and I hope you are right about time being our companion. ![]() ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for your kind words, Floria. ![]() ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Madame C, time is an infinite mobius strip no end, no beginning, our lives just one blip on this endless screen, our lives unfold with time as our backdrop, history unrolls when human existence meets the end of time it loops back around and begins to re-wind Wonderful write. ![]() |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Lyra, this is one of those "thinking" pieces of poetry. I'll sit and ponder your wise words. Very nicely thought out. I enjoyed this. The last two lines are my favorite. Cheryl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
our wallpaper sky, turns clouds into rain loved this line...as I finish my clouds on my ceiling good thing they can't rain upon me *s Maureen |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
time stands still as mankind evolves on life's carousel, our fate revolves yes we are in the hands of fate arent we it seems..i enjoyed your words dear Madame hugss ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for the reply and the compliment, Sy. ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Cheryl...I am glad that I was able to help you find your thinking cap again....and I was worried that you might have lost it.... ![]() I should have known better than that...you are definitely a thinker! Thanks for the reply ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Maureen...I sure hope that those clouds on your ceiling don't rain on you...that might make you a bit uncomfortable. What room in your house has the clouds on the ceiling? This intrigues me. ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Madame - time does continue into infinity. And so many changes come with it, as it marches on, good and bad... BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for the hugs, Victoria...They are a comfort when time flies a bit too fast! ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Every time I see your name I know I'm about to read something amazing and this was no exception. I loved every line! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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