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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Windswept Lovers ~*Marge Tindal*~  Across the plains of time indiscreet his love has caressed the all of me Upon the throne of barren reign softly in death he spoke my name~ Felicity Dela Marcaesa comes once more seeking your key to open my doors Locks are meant to be broken when no longer words are spoken~ Maiden of the chambers was I until the master caught my eye Took me to his heart-bed though I knew we'd never wed~ Sixteen years in shadows hidden for this Prince of man was bidden to serve his country when the time came for the crowning glory would be his fame~ But he must have one of more nobility For him they sought blood lines of dignity And though he tried to disagree it was not ... no ... not to be~ So a chosen one was graced with ring of wed on hand now placed But he swore his heart was mine and would be ... for all of time~ I did not care that he had wed only that he kept my bed Liaison of infidel minds leaving beliefs of others behind~ I'll return when morning breaks to share more of my mistakes Caught now in the interim of memories etched of him~ *And here she breathes again~ This mysterious muse from the meadow~ January 16, 2002 /pip/Forum53/HTML/000568.html ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (01-17-2002 11:14 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Marge, Marge, Marge, this is just stunning words you present us with this morning. TERRIFIC!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The words are exquisite in the way it validates the picture. Beautifully done!! "Caught now in the interim of memories etched of him~" |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh now this was simply wonderful and the picture really enhanced it. floria |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
The pictue and the poem combined made the whole just wonderful, Marge. jwesley |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Justice well served, Marge. I'm hooked. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, your poems are such a joy to read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Marge...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lost love blows away in the winds of time. What an incredible write! "I'll return when morning breaks to share more of my mistakes" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm so glad she has gifted you with her story... for you tell it so beautifully! I love this, Marge... and can't wait for her to speak with you again. *S* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Marge this is fantastic..are there others in a series I have missed? I must find them, if so. Sandra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marge - Wow, quite the story here. I enjoyed this thoroughly. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunning!!! I love the whole story of this one. BRAVO!!! Magnificent. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Marge, you write as if you graced that bed. Lovely, enchanting and wonderfully worded. Cheryl |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
I simply melted with this fabulous poem of love and romance! This is magnificent! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful, Marge! Hugs! Cor |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
***Thank you ALL SO VERY MUCH~ I know not the where or the 'why' of this muse ... only what she reveals on each visit~ Perhaps 'together' we will learn more of her musing of mysterious message ?? CarolinaMoon~ The first coming of Felicity Dela Marcaesa can be found at this link - entitled 'And She Breathes ...'~ /pip/Forum53/HTML/000568.html I will wait patiently for her next 'message'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You are blessed with an open spirit...the story breathes through you...and beautifully... Hugs! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge, what and exquisite poem and the picture is really cool! I love it! You have done it again, my dear poet friend! Hugs Cindi |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh you knew that I would love this one, didn't you dear lady....love this gem!!! Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*SweetFriends~ She comes to me ... I speak only what she utters~ 'Open Spirit' ... yes, that MUST be it~ Thank you all soooooo much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, great minds have we. I just adore this graphic and your interpretation of it. I had just joined Passions when you posted this. I'm glad I got to read it. huggles and smiles, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. –St. Francis of Assisi |
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