Open Poetry #18 |
Music To My Heart |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your love is like a symphony Playing music to my heart Even though there is much distance Keeping you and I apart The distance becomes irrelevant As my heart calls out to you How it overflows with joy Whenever you come into view My dreams bring you right beside me In my dreams we're never apart As I count the amount of steps it takes To reach your warm and loving heart The pinnacles of passion we climb With such ease we reach its peak How entranced am I looking into your eyes As my knees suddenly feel so weak Your love is surely a gift That has been bestowed upon me How you warm my aching heart And set my spirit free Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, 2002 and it just keeps getting better. Wonderful write Sue. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Ones spirit is meant to be set free ... and such words are more than music any orchestra could ever play. Excellent piece ... simply beautiful. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Your love sings of the passion that you share. Absolutely beautiful. A sensual delight to read. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet Sue, you are soooooooo romantic! (kiss on cheek) May you forever stand happily on the pinnacles of passion with cheer and loving smiles and hope! We all love you so much, sweet Sue, love sings in your heart like music! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very nicely done, Sue, it reaches out to you, loved the read...very gentle smile |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I really enjoyed reading this.. it is true!!! Distance does not matter as long as the connection is truly there.. Your words are music to my heart Pepper |
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