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OWG
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 155
California

0 posted 2002-01-21 05:27 PM



old iron
is a highway shirt
dressed for no where to go
with snaps loose
to tap off key rhythm

the throttle pushes my face
into cellophane
wind fingers are kids
with little wrenches
making new wrinkles

moving places
over the dead man under
then laughing
at what they
build

highway signs are in latin
when I read them
with squinted eyes
at ninty five
sonar of pipe talk

off the tin of them
I know the way now
my leather makes friends
with abrasion sounds
of the sun hands on my back

old dog tail with welcome home wag..

©OWG  (findin the right road from memory...off 101 south)

© Copyright 2002 ©OWG - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-01-21 05:31 PM


been following your trail..as always your paths are telling.
*s
M

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038
USA
2 posted 2002-01-21 05:34 PM


Just anuthuh Harley day, huh, Owage?  laughing

what is mundane, seems exciting in your 90MPH eyes!

Ride on, black knight, and kiss the sky.  
(was here for a moment, and wanted to thank you
for you kind replies, and say: howdy, too!)

tSR

OWG
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 155
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3 posted 2002-01-22 06:02 AM


nekkid and SR...thanks you two...just more of the metal movin stuff..(grin)

nice to see both of you are well...thanks again

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2002-01-22 04:51 PM


the way of the road, does tell....the story...indeed nice from your eyes...


Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

Victoria
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5 posted 2002-01-22 05:04 PM


my leather makes friends
with abrasion sounds
of the sun hands on my back


Enjoyed OWG...sun hands on your back
and the moon hands are somewhere else ha..
Wiggling away

                ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2002-01-22 05:09 PM


Those footnotes you leave behind are too much!

They say one's memory is the first thing to go.  
But it looks to me like you know exactly where you're going.

A Tone of Voice
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since 2001-07-18
Posts 287

7 posted 2002-01-22 05:45 PM


I like the tone of your journey. black leather and wind sounds, surreal.


Atov

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