navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #18 » Love Worth Living
Open Poetry #18
Post A Reply Post New Topic Love Worth Living Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-01-22 06:02 PM


Love Worth Living


Love with the ease
Of the air that we breath
A look a smile rising
From within almost surprising

Eyes lock in a brief moment
Some unknown electrical component
Slowly drawing us near
No past pain so no fear

No hidden meanings in words spoken
No holding back from preconceived notions
Fredom for true self to pour forth
In everyday life and passions scorch

Honesty, strength, dependability
Complete reliance on thease
To recieve love like this would be truely living
True love worth giving

by
Connie McDonald
Copyright@2001
April 20, 2001
8:20am

[This message has been edited by Zinsser (01-22-2002 06:23 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
1 posted 2002-01-22 06:14 PM


Connie,  this certainly contains all of the
parts of what true love is...You have said
it all and said it well...

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #18 » Love Worth Living

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary