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Open Poetry #18

Sadness came to paradise

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-21 05:11 PM

Sadness came
to paradise
it didn't surprised me
since everything has
it's down side
But it came unexpected
and after so long
Then all of the sudden
your love transformed
It's not that you don't
love me
it's that you love me differently
And it's true
my love had changed too
I loved you more than
before
But now that you bring tears
to my eyes
you're way of loving
it's drowning mine

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-21 05:18 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Walker, your new poems have been so sad, I hope all is alright with you and I hope that this love you share will always fill you with happiness and shine golden with trust and faith! (kiss on cheek) Our hearts go out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-21 05:22 PM

*sigh* how incredibly sad....One love should not drown another but should add to each others love and become balanced....My heart goes out to you...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2002-01-21 05:27 PM

Ah, yes...the "I still love you...but differently" style...which can be the most painful of all. Very well said, sir...

china doll
Junior Member

since 2002-01-20

Posts 22

4 posted 2002-01-21 05:40 PM

The ending is what got me....beautiful poem, nice close...but I cry tears for you because I know how you feel.Please don't let that heart ache, everyone is here for you, we're all ears...and here to give you a *Hug*

Sincerely Joanna

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