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The Apartment
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The Apartment |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Many waking moments looking at the view sorting through emotions a place of solitude Looking at the ocean silence in the night waves breaking on the sands reflecting the city lights A place where you can come too when you need to get away from all that is troubling you through the journey of your day Tranquilty at its best as you hear the distant waves its time to make the choice do you go or do you stay. Expressions, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Many waking moments looking at the view sorting through emotions a place of solitude I have a view like this...though it is myself I ask the question. Absolutely remarkable write! |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
I am glad you can relate and that you liked it. Fee Expressions, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh...I love this poem...I wish I had a place like that to go...**giggling** but I would probably spend all my time there day dreaming. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Fee We all need a special place and your words took me to yours. There is nothing like the calming sound of the ocean and a great source of inspiration. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
give me the address....do you time share.. this sums it up well...I think we all need one every now and then...I guess that is what poetry is to me...my apartment... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this sounds like such a beautiful place, sweet friend, I would love to go and listen to the waves break and see the sunset before my very eyes and lower all my burdens and smile! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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