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Fee
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0 posted 2002-01-21 02:58 AM


Many waking moments
looking at the view
sorting through emotions
a place of solitude

Looking at the ocean
silence in the night
waves breaking on the sands
reflecting the city lights

A place where you can come too
when you need to get away
from all that is troubling you
through the journey of your day

Tranquilty at its best
as you hear the distant waves
its time to make the choice
do you go or do you stay.

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

© Copyright 2002 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-01-21 03:03 AM


Many waking moments
looking at the view
sorting through emotions
a place of solitude

I have a view like this...though it is myself I ask the question.
Absolutely remarkable write!

Fee
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2 posted 2002-01-21 05:37 AM


I am glad you can relate and that you liked it.

Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-21 08:32 AM


Oh gosh...I love this poem...I wish I had a place like that to go...**giggling** but I would probably spend all my time there day dreaming. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Suetang
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4 posted 2002-01-21 04:22 PM


Hello Fee
We all need a special place and your words took me to yours.  There is nothing like the calming sound of the ocean and a great source of inspiration.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2002-01-21 04:31 PM


give me the address....do you time share..
this sums it up well...I think we all need
one every now and then...I guess that is
what poetry is to me...my apartment...

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6 posted 2002-01-21 05:51 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this sounds like such a beautiful place, sweet friend, I would love to go and listen to the waves break and see the sunset before my very eyes and lower all my burdens and smile! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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