Open Poetry #18 |
Love ends when it has to end |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I opened the door and there you were sitting looking straight at me You could not find my eyes they had wondered off I had warned you but you failed to listen Now you search in vain love ends when it has to end |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart cries out to all those lovers who fell in love only to realize that this love couldn't last, and wish them all for the greatest happiness to follow! (kiss on cheek) You always express love so well, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Walker, you must be experiencing some heart-breaking times. Two good writes along the same line. Very good yet sad too. Cheryl |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You could not find my eyes they had wondered off I had warned you but you failed to listen Now you search in vain And it takes what it takes to 'see' what we have lost. |
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nichole2005 Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 20 |
Wow you sound like you are going through some pretty tough times. I can relate to that though. I have been through some pretty tough times lately. I am sorry! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
been there, done that, am there right now. Good write. bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A sad moment for the eyes that wondered off and those left wondering....Sometimes the moment is not seized...Surely a better one awaits...only to be seen.. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
someone who loves me said "I don't know how I would ever stop this" I often wondered why some love ends and other love doesn't. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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