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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-01-20 01:16 PM

When we said the words
forever
When we try to be strong,
Never wanted anything,
to go wrong,
Guess,
It had to end this way,
When the sun had gone down,
our love that to last,
when the days go fast,
Without unspoken words
The words never meant to be
broken
when finally everything
had to come
to an end
When we said goodbye
We left alone ,
When we said goodbye,
We left everything,
When we said goodbye
The roses you gave to me,
that had faded too
Each petal fell down,
like a broken heart
Into two
When we said goodbye,
It Is like each petal
fell on the ground,
When we said goodbye

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

1 posted 2002-01-20 01:21 PM

This is just so sad!! That's why it's no use giving roses, chocolates or paper hearts on Valentine's Day... They are nothing if there is no love...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-20 01:23 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to everyone who experiences these heartbreaks and I pray that all the rose petals will come back and symbolize showers of happiness of a heart so rich and smiling with true love! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you always welcome your love every day with joy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-01-20 01:24 PM

vandana~Very good write, and oh so sad.
Big Hugs to you my friend, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-20 01:27 PM

*sigh* I hate goodbyes...they always come with so much pain. My heart goes out to you. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-01-20 02:19 PM

Oh boy....this almost put tears in my eyes..
I do hate goodbyes....So much feelings can
be with all of the hellos...and saying
goodbye really can hurt...

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2002-01-20 05:18 PM

so sad and you describe the pain inside goodbyes very well....

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-01-20 05:31 PM

Very sad..you described it so well..

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2002-01-20 05:36 PM

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-01-21 04:39 AM

Well said vandana...James

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2002-01-21 03:58 PM

Vandana, goodbye can be the hardest word in the world to say. I hate doing it.
Enjoyed your poem.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

11 posted 2002-01-21 04:01 PM

the worst part of any day is saying good-bye to a loved one...I know it rips my heart out to do it most times and thats just for a few hours!...thanks for sharing this tender piece...Rod

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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