Open Poetry #18 |
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Sweetly I Mellowed |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia ![]() |
Sweetly I Mellowed Around four years ago This writing began Words tumbling out With no specific plan Emotions spilling forth Teardrops to flow At times analyzing Which parts to show At first pen to paper Then onto a screen Examined by detail Are parts of me seen With a fluency to flow Emotions exposing Sometimes unable I hesitate supposing Attempting and trying With heart into text I’m nothing unique Pondering what next Another poetry page Old ones yellowed Wisdom with aging Sweetly I mellowed Hope © 2002 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Like a fine wine, growing better in time Hope. Indeed you mellowed.......wonderfuly. Well written Hope, seems like those days were just yesterday. Hugs. Donna On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-21-2002 09:50 AM).] |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hi thanks Donna , I enjoyed your fun, sweet reply , coming online 5 years ago , time does seem to fly Hope |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Very Sweetly penned. ![]() Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hi thanks Donna , I enjoyed your fun, sweet reply , coming online 5 years ago , time does seem to fly Hope |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hope I know Spyders seems like ages ago.....hope you are doing good. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Donna , you have a good memory , yes Spyders was one of the first boards I posted on and still do post there Hope |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) We all love your beautiful works of art, sweet freind, and your heart continues to grow through every gorgeous poem you write! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always sing to all our hearts! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shin eupon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
I've only known you half that time, but it's been so very rewarding my 'mellow' friend. mutington/joyce |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Noah your replies always give me that loving lift , with sweet words , you have the gift Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Joyce for your kind reply and for sharing your friendship and your time , you know how I do appreciate it Hope |
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