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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-01-21 09:47 AM


Sweetly I Mellowed

Around four years ago
This writing began
Words tumbling out
With no specific plan

Emotions spilling forth
Teardrops to flow
At times analyzing
Which parts to show

At first pen to paper
Then onto a screen
Examined by detail
Are parts of me seen

With a fluency to flow
Emotions exposing
Sometimes  unable
I hesitate supposing

Attempting and trying
With heart into text
I’m nothing unique
Pondering what next

Another poetry page
Old ones yellowed
Wisdom with aging
Sweetly I mellowed

Hope © 2002


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-01-21 09:49 AM


Like a fine wine, growing better in time Hope.  Indeed you mellowed.......wonderfuly.
Well written Hope, seems like those days were just yesterday.  Hugs.
Donna  


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-21-2002 09:50 AM).]

HopeS
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2 posted 2002-01-21 10:23 AM


Hi thanks Donna , I enjoyed your fun, sweet reply , coming online 5 years ago , time does seem to fly
Hope

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3 posted 2002-01-21 10:29 AM


Very Sweetly penned.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

HopeS
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4 posted 2002-01-21 10:31 AM


Hi thanks Donna , I enjoyed your fun, sweet reply , coming online 5 years ago , time does seem to fly
Hope

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-01-21 10:32 AM


Hope I know Spyders seems like ages ago.....hope you are doing good.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

HopeS
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6 posted 2002-01-21 10:47 AM


Thanks Donna , you have a good memory , yes Spyders was one of the first boards I posted on and still do post there
Hope

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7 posted 2002-01-21 01:06 PM




(smiles) We all love your beautiful works of art, sweet freind, and your heart continues to grow through every gorgeous poem you write! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always sing to all our hearts! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shin eupon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

mutington
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8 posted 2002-01-22 01:50 AM


I've only known you half that time, but
it's been so very rewarding my 'mellow'
friend.

mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."
MUTINGTON'S  MEADOWS



HopeS
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9 posted 2002-01-22 01:53 AM


Thanks Noah your replies always give me that loving lift , with sweet words , you have the gift
Hope

HopeS
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10 posted 2002-01-22 01:56 AM


Thanks Joyce for your kind reply and for sharing your friendship and your time , you know how I do appreciate it
Hope

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