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Of Man And Moon
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Of Man And Moon |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
"Is it Moon, yet?" he asked. Does the Yellow Orb of Destiny hide in brilliant genius behind silver-gray clouds? And, will the Moon succeed in staking its claim upon my heart...light-tinged? Has it passed me by yet: this Moon with its bright Man-Face. There is no Moon for me. There is only endless expanses in a pitch-black sky: Moon-less and Moon-Mourned. Yet, he asked me if it is Moon yet; and I wonder if he could be the face of a destined Moon ........rising .........within my heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may his loving heart forever be both the moon in your dreams and the sun that warms your heart everyday with loves happiness! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always so spellbinding gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the moon of romance....he will rise in your heart and fill your life with visions of tender and passionate love. ***big hugs*** I love this one, Ivy. I could feel it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yet, he asked me if it is Moon yet; and I wonder if he could be the face of a destined Moon ........rising .........within my heart. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh Ivy!! How much do I love this one? Just look at the smile on my face! Love it I do! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
enjoyed this very much, Ivy, love the moon ...always! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Ah, the mysterious, beautiful moon shall glow forever in our mind and hearts. I loved this poem, it had it's own beautiful and mysterious quality which fit perfectly! Love, Bonnie |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh! yes..loved those last lines too..very lovely indeed HUGS ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh how I love the moon, to think of a black sky without it is sad. lovely. floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Would love ever again be written if there were only a black sky above? Me thinks not. Such are the qualities of the moon and our emotions...You expressed them well.... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi Ivy! I love to feel the moon, the stars, the skies I feel each shine glow deeply in your eyes And when you pen a pretty verse, so free I feel your glowing shine in poetry. -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ "Is it Moon, yet?" I just love the imagery of this piece~ Another piece of that 'reflected glow'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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