Open Poetry #18 |
The Very Same |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Very Same I’ve lived a life of misty morn With colored skies and butterflies With crystal due that washed new born That sang to me in lullabies. I’ve walked among the daffodil And played within the valley’s green I’ve idled nostrils winter shrill And savored all of winters scene. I looked across the great divide And saw the vultures soar on high Watched the mountains brake and slide. And heard the winds of time go by. I’ve sipped the cup of ecstasy And wore the crown of every day I’ve tasted love and fantasy And everything that came my way. All within the misty dawn The very same where I was born. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Okay...I am keeping this one. I flowed with delight through the whole of it and then wanted more...This poem is absolutely magnificent. I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, Thank you sweet. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, Seymour, this is my kind of poem! It's as if you were inside my brain. There's loads of room up there these days I love this!!!!! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kathleen, And another for you. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour, siiiiigh,,such a beautiful heartfelt poem, of the beauty of this wonderful earth. And my favorite lines "I’ve sipped the cup of ecstasy And wore the crown of every day" how very creative. floria |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*as always a delight to read Sey, just love it Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've lived a life of misty morn With colored skies and butterflies With crystal due that washed new born That sang to me in lullabies. =================================== I've idled nostrils winter shrill And savored all of winters scene. =================================== Watched the mountains brake and slide. And heard the winds of time go by. I've sipped the cup of ecstasy And wore the crown of every day ===================================== All within the misty dawn The very same where I was born. ===================================== Ahh me sweet Stinky...you take us to Eden in rhyme this morn... I cant imagine not having your wisdoms verse to start my "misty morn" You are the raspberry in my morning cup of tea the cadence I butter me bagel with *L* this is lovely Sy-babes. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Enjoyed this one excellent writing Seymour |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, Thank you love. Charisma, Glad you enjoyed. *L* JM, I buttered your bagel and you sweetened my tea. I guess we had breakfast together this morning. WW S Rex, Glad you enjoyed. |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Seymour, Such powerful visionary (or is it visual? maybe both ) impact! I could see such vivid images in my mind. Everything about this is just so wonderfully clear, almost tangible. Thanks for the read! ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do enjoy ALL of this...but the play on words here... quote:made me giggle... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DarkAngel, *L* Sunshine, I made the sun giggle. *L* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
If I reply can i have a kiss too haa... ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
All within the misty dawn The very same where I was born. A glorious day through the eyes of sky songs. Sincerely, Regina |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Seymour ... a beautifully flowing lullibye of words to greet this misty morn. Excellent phrasing and visuals throughout, much enjoyed these tender sentiments and the pictures they brought to my mind. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, You can have two Rwood, Thank you and one for you two. Kit, I thank you sweet. *L* |
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