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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2002-01-21 09:33 PM


Acrostic's some kind of poem
Containing a device
Rhyming's not important, no it
Only makes it nice
Sometimes I find it difficult
To find which words to choose
It took me 15 minutes
Composing this for "youse"



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Martie
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1 posted 2002-01-21 09:45 PM


Hi Toe...good to see youse!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-01-21 09:47 PM


Evening Mr. Toerag!  I sure do like this one!
You do acrostics very well.
Pleasure to see you again.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Love is the realization of a beautiful dream~

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-01-21 09:49 PM


Toe~

Tee-Hee
Hit's shore good to see you
In these blue pages
Shining up the joint

In your own indelible ink
Saying just the right thing to

Get us all
Oogling the style
Of one of our favorites
Dang, you're sooooooo talented !

*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                   

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-01-21 11:17 PM




YAY!!! (smiles) This is soooooooo cute and clever, sweet friend, I love it!

Terrific
Outstanding
Excellent
Reverent
Awesome
Great

We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

suthern
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5 posted 2002-01-22 05:24 PM


G osh, it's great to see you!
A round this place again
R eally wish you'd stay awhile
E very now and then
O ne thing's sure - I miss you
T oe, dear, try to stick around

I know when I see your name
H appiness abounds.

You always knew I was a bit backwards, didn't you? LOL. Great acrostic, Toe... and so very great to see you!!!!

[This message has been edited by suthern (01-22-2002 05:26 PM).]

Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-01-22 09:33 PM



TOE!  Welcome home!  'Bout time we saw you 'round here...

Victoria
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7 posted 2002-01-22 09:58 PM


youse is a very good poet.. ha.. enjoyed

                ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

Corinne
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8 posted 2002-01-22 10:03 PM


Hey, Bamie man!

Sure it good to see you back in the saddle!

Cor

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9 posted 2002-01-22 10:19 PM


hehe, that was cute.
Kethry
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10 posted 2002-01-23 08:32 AM


Toe, did ya know you spelt louse wrong, or should it have been "Ewes" for me.
Love what you did with the acrostic thingy.
Keth

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