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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-21 10:58 PM

Two hearts, two souls, two shadows as one.
Walking a beach of sand beneath stars.
The crescent moon blending within
The waves lapping on the shore.

Distant lights illuminate the sands.
The lonely sweep of a lighthouse warning.
Sounds of signals and bells in the night.
A kiss, a walk, beneath the stars this night.

Lost in love, as footprints dimple sand.
Lovers walk as one, hand in hand.
Kisses given at the pause of their trek
Sighs of living, as these two give a peck.

Cabin high upon the hills above.
Calling lovers to once again feel love.
Candles bright that flicker in the breeze
as sighs of wind do flow through trees.

Listen to the call of the still of night
Of love’s sighs that fall under light.
Two become one on the sandy shore
as each spur on, as one giving more.

Let the sea call the love once again
as this woman does love this man.
Take a trek upon a windy shore
For there you’ll see...is so much more.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-01-21 11:03 PM

Lost in love, as footprints dimple sand"

Magnus~

I love the words and feelings you use to describe how love is....the above is breathtaking.....

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-21-2002 11:03 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-21 11:08 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, such beautiful beachside romance fills your words and have me envisioning such dazzling colors of sunrise and sunset as hearts melt together in bliss! (big hugggssssss) Sooooooo spellbinding, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you write romance so masterfully! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-21 11:08 PM

Oh, this really got to me. so much.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2002-01-21 11:08 PM

A very nice painting from your pen, Magnus

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2002-01-21 11:59 PM

very nice images here MAGNUS.. much enjoyed that walk on the sand...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

6 posted 2002-01-22 12:03 PM

Powerful words of desire, passion, and moonlit spells. Magnus...magnificent poem as always. ***Ivy Rose

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-01-22 09:59 AM

Oh my gosh, You're psychic,, you mentioned all the things I love, waves, beach, lighthouse, cabin in the hills...now where is this place? LOL great poem, I fell right into it Magnus. I am trying to do my second romantic poem. I do like them. floria

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-01-22 10:07 AM

Magnus darling boy Oh my!! I’m stunned with admiration this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and flow in this is absolutely excellent.

You are always a fabulous writer, in this you have excelled yourself.

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi

If you keep writing like this I shall start running out of superlatives and that would never do would it?

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2002-01-22 10:14 AM

sand and sea and mountains high
you have caught it all, *s

Maureen

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

10 posted 2002-01-22 04:32 PM

very nice......

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2002-01-22 04:42 PM

Let the sea call the love once again
as this woman does love this man.

Those lines were the heart of the poem to me.
This was so scenic and romantic,
about as close as you can get to a virtual paradise.

Nice writing Magnus.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2002-01-22 05:43 PM

Magnus~

'Lovers walk as one, hand in hand.'

Romantic imagery galore packed in this one~
You blend the hearts in beautiful poetic unison~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2002-01-23 01:10 AM

Magnus - great write and lovely to read. I like this one very much...

BC

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

14 posted 2002-01-23 07:27 AM

Beautiful imagery Magnus ... a tender, tranquil read to grace the heart and soul ... just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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