Open Poetry #18 |
Peas and Milk |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Momma says when I grow up, ...I'll be big and strong, Just eat your carrots, drink your milk, ...I hope it don't take long. There's a boy in second grade, ...who's mean as mean can be, He waits outside the schoolhouse door, ...each day to beat on me. I thought first grade would be a treat, ...to learn to read and write, It seems the only thing I need, ...is learning how to fight. There's the bell, school day is done, ...I walk outside afraid, But as I leave the schoolhouse door, ...no boy from second grade. It seems his parents moved away, ...he's no longer here, I run and jump and sing and play, ...released from bully's fear. Tonight at supper, momma says, ...eat every single pea, Drink your milk 'til its all gone, ...you'll shoot up like a tree. I push away from table's side, ...peas still on my plate, I say to momma, I'll stay a kid, ...growing up can wait. [This message has been edited by Tim (01-21-2002 05:21 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"growing up can wait." smiling, I've been telling myself that for forty years! I like this much, seemingly whimsical but points out the fact that we all have fears. Enjoyed, Mr. Tim! It's good to be home today! |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
this sounds so muck like de ja vu for a line or two I was back there thank you |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
interesting title...and a nice touch of nostalgia...cute too...lol...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim--There is alot of pain in childhood, eating peas is one of them, leaning that the world can be mean is another. Wonderful writing! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is so cute.. although such a shame children have to deal with the bullies in school..can scar them for ever..nicely done Tim ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a great walk down memory lane.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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