Open Poetry #18 |
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Weekly Bath |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan ![]() |
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some new, some threadbare I sort them by color, the lights and the darks on their nametags, I always read their remarks some of them tell me they like to be cool to get in hot water, they would be a fool others like soaking in tropical heat it makes their bathing experience sweet inside a machine with some bubbles, they go dancing and swirling to sweet water flow taking some time for a relaxing soak to prepare for the stress, agitation provokes next, spinning around like a wheel of roulette a motor driven pirouhette soon they're again nice and clean, smelling sweet but shivering cold and in need of some heat to ease their chills, the next step comes blasts of hot air in a tumbling drum at last, an end to their bathing ordeal they emerge warm and dry from that hot ferris wheel before they go home, I fold them with care in their own little drawer, now ready to wear as I happily bid my clean friends goodbye til next time I need them, they know I'll stop by |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
I love when someone does this type of a write. Gives you a different perspective of a common chore. Maybe I think it is neat because I have the same type of thought process...lol...thanks for sharing...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I caught that pun, what a beautiful poem about a visit to the laundromat! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, you always write such cute, humorous, delightful poems that make things that seem typical so much fun and larger than life! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Madam Chipmunk! Must you air your dirty laundry in public??? ![]() |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling with delight* oh how I love this poem. It put a smile on my face after a very long day....Thank you so much. **big big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
You always make housework sound like so much fun haha... ![]() ![]() ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lyra...I am getting dizzy from spinning around.... Would you please fold me and put me away... And I hate harsh detergents...so go easy on it... This is cute...loved it... |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Lyra, very cute piece on a mundane chore. Thanks for lightening the load. Cheryl |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL...cute write Lyra! Enjoyed this one this afternoon. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lyra--Much enjoyed this spin on the laundry. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Rodney...Thanks for your reply...I think laundry can actually be a very poetic experience. ![]() Noah...Thanks, but I don't go to the laundromat...I am lucky enough to have my own washer and dryer at home. If I didn't, my laundry would probably never get done. ![]() Michael...I'm not airing my dirty laundry...by the time you get to see it, its all clean already. ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Karen...thanks for replying...and I am so happy that I was able to make you giggle. ![]() Victoria...thanks for your reply...and you are welcome here anytime, to help me with my housework. We will make it a housework party and then write a poem about it which we will post here. ![]() Thanks Barry...I hope I didn't shrink you too much! ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Cheryl, Nancy and Martie...You ladies are all invited to the laundry party too! We'll have a wonderful time drinking champagne and eating fine cheese with crackers and we'll all break our diets. ![]() ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you know I had to read this. I LOVE taking a bath ![]() Kathleen--(Kay) |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Lyra - I remember this fun laundry write. It almost convinced me that doing the laundry can be fun, and then I regained my sanity. ![]() Dave |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Madam Chipmunk, wonders never cease. Washing can be fun! Thanks for making it so. ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
CAN'T WAIT!!!! ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Madame C, LOL You can air your laundry here anytime! Fun write on a dull topic. My wife she likes to watch, So her laundry she won't botch. Until the water reaches the top, She'll stand and watch 'til it stops. |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Lyra, I'll never look at washing clothes the same way again. I love the way you personified the laundry - I swear that I almost heard giggling coming from my dryer a minute ago. Those darn socks are having way too much fun spinning 'round and 'round ![]() ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ [This message has been edited by DarkAngelChelle (01-22-2002 12:36 AM).] |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lyra darling girl, I loved this, it was and is you at your very very best. A great fun write, and as always with you absolutely excellent. I loved it all darling girl absolutely ever single word Absolutely excellent work Don’t stop writing you improve daily and this shows just how well you can Write. ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love doing laundry, so I enjoyed this *s M |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for your replies...Kay, Dave and Newell... Dave, I'm glad you regained your senses... I certainly wouldn't WANT you to enjoy doing your laundry! ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (01-22-2002 12:18 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Michael...I loved the picture of you...that is you, isn't it? ![]() Larry...thanks for the cute poem ![]() Chelle...I'm glad that I cast laundry in a new light for you...now you can enjoy it. ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Marsha and Wynter...I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem...thanks for your replies. ![]() ![]() ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
you know, the way it sounded it kinda reminded me of the wheel going round and round and round |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Like it ![]() like it a lot ![]() yep I truly like this cute one ![]() ![]() Charisma |
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