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She Wore Fuchsia
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She Wore Fuchsia |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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She wore fuchsia like a summer rose a blossom of loveliness mahogany hair laced with mountain rain and velvet skin kissed by a flaxen moon she wore fuchsia scent of a honeysuckle rose a blossom of tenderness soft caramel kisses smeared upon a satin pillow in the warmth of an imaginary night she wore fuchsia to hide the thorns in her heart but still tasted fuchsia within the lost breeze of his kiss You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-21-2002 06:36 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, may these caramel kisses of her dreams forever touch her heart with hope of true love and may her perfume of fuchsia touch the love of her life's heart and lead him to her to love eternally! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you truly are our Queen of Imagery! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I said it before and I'll say it again, YOU are the queen of imagery  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
she wore fuchsia to hide the thorns in her heart but still tasted fuchsia within the lost breeze of his kiss *sigh* and the brightness of it can hide the thorns that pierced her heart....Stunning vision in this poem. It says so much in such a brilliant way. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so absolutely beautifully imaged, Victoria I loved this part mahogany hair laced with mountain rain and velvet skin kissed by a flaxen moon Awesome!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and again your images amaze and tantalize V. I have enjoyed watching your poetry grow better with each verse written. So well done V! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
*She wore fuchsia like a summer rose* those first two lines reeled me in. This was a beautiful read. -R "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Victoria...James |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Your poems always wear color so well. *s |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And do I love caramel hmmm good one ~V M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Your words are so expressive Victoria, lovely poem. floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Rebekah..thank you so much..nice to hear from you.. james..thank you as always James chansondegeste ..Thank you so much..glad you enjoyed..nice to hear from you today hugss Wynter..yes especially caramel kisses  Floria..thank you for your sweet comments |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Looks good on you girl! I like that color and those caramel kisses. Nice going Victoria~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Victoria.....Hugs, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i know i thanked you all last night but it must not of took so im thanking you again haa.. Noah..thank you so much dear..hugss kathleen thank you so much..so nice of you to say HUGSS Karen..thank you Karen..im glad you enjoyed Madame.. thank you and i love the mermaid too Donna..thank you .. i enjoy yours too..i learn so much from everyone Ms. Serenade..thank you very much..glad you liked  Nancy..Thank you ..always nice to hear from you Nancy..hugs |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
she wore fuchsia to hide the thorns in her heart but still tasted fuchsia within the lost breeze of his kiss ----------------- Wonderful.....with a lovely twist at the end to make us stop and ponder... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
my enchanted_melody..thank you for visiting today..appreciate your nice comments |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You made this sound like a beautiful pianting, though she was alone and sad in the end. You must be living my life again.. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Email me sometime and let me know whats going on sandra hugss |
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