Open Poetry #18 |
Meet Me By The Waterfall |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Meet Me By The Waterfall By: Noah Eaton 1/20/02 Meet me by the waterfall Where the sparrows become bards in school Where the cupids play duck, duck, goose Around a lovers wading pool Laugh with me in the sunshine Through the timothy and gardens of tiffany glass Dance with me in the cattail meadows Roll with me among the frosted cotton grass Down on the beach we will rest Kissing each other before the cranberry dusk Dreaming together as lovers in rhapsody In golden happiness we will conquer our lust Meet me at eternity’s gate I will always be the love of your life I will always love you, sweet RosePetal You will be mine… All the time... My love... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-20-2002 09:47 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh honey, this is gorgeous! I cannot pass up this heartfelt request from you, so I will meet you by the waterfall, don't be late! Love you |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
nice imagery there MA can I get directions and an invite too? Nice job. Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful...Beautiful...Beautiful... Guess what Noah? I think this poem is simply beautiful! and very romantic too! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
WOW!!! EXTREMELY PASSIONATE!!! What an invitation for your sweet love, RosePetal. ***Ivy Rose |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful poem sweet Noah! I can see your Joanna smiling all the way up here! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
now see, you are loved.....aw this is so tender and special. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh Noah..i just love this..you are a real sweetie hugss...and an angel too ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What lovely descriptive words you use in this piece. How could she resist such a beautiful poem, such a beautiful heart. (and I see she has already answered!!.) Enjoy the waterfall you two!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sweet romance...how I love it...I love waterfalls too...that is the perfect place for you to meet. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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poeticdreamer Junior Member
since 2002-01-17
Posts 46 |
Now this was so refreshing and cool to be given a look into your loving mind! poeticdreamer |
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poetryinmotion Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 61mass |
hi Noah what a beautiful poem. so romantic. which waterfall is it? because i'll be there waiting. this is a very heart warming poem. love Alice |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Beautiful imagery!!!! The duck, duck, goose part was sooo cute, I loved it!!!! Keep these love poems coming cause i just eat them up :love ya: -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great romance here. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Noah, how very beautiful. I am wishing i am at that waterfall to see all the beauty of it all. floria |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how lovely and sooooo romantic. I truly enjoyed the tenderness within. Well done my dear romantic friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You sure can put it all together Noah Excellent |
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