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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-01-20 09:47 PM



Meet Me By The Waterfall
By: Noah Eaton
1/20/02

Meet me by the waterfall
Where the sparrows become bards in school
Where the cupids play duck, duck, goose
Around a lovers wading pool

Laugh with me in the sunshine
Through the timothy and gardens of tiffany glass
Dance with me in the cattail meadows
Roll with me among the frosted cotton grass

Down on the beach we will rest
Kissing each other before the cranberry dusk
Dreaming together as lovers in rhapsody
In golden happiness we will conquer our lust

Meet me at eternity’s gate
I will always be the love of your life
I will always love you, sweet RosePetal
You will be mine…
All the time...
My love...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-20-2002 09:47 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-20 10:27 PM


Oh honey, this is gorgeous! I cannot pass up this heartfelt request from you, so I will meet you by the waterfall, don't be late!
Love you  

Rodney Belcher
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2 posted 2002-01-20 10:34 PM


nice imagery there MA can I get directions and an invite too? Nice job. Rod

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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3 posted 2002-01-20 10:41 PM


Beautiful...Beautiful...Beautiful...
Guess what Noah?
I think this poem is simply beautiful!

and very romantic too!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2002-01-20 10:44 PM


WOW!!! EXTREMELY PASSIONATE!!! What an invitation for your sweet love, RosePetal.

***Ivy Rose

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5 posted 2002-01-20 10:55 PM


Beautiful poem sweet Noah!  I can see your Joanna smiling all the way up here!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2002-01-20 11:05 PM


now see, you are loved.....aw this is so tender and special.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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7 posted 2002-01-20 11:09 PM


Oh Noah..i just love this..you are a real sweetie hugss...and an angel too

               ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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8 posted 2002-01-20 11:15 PM


What lovely descriptive words you use in this piece. How could she resist such a beautiful poem, such a beautiful heart. (and I see she has already answered!!.) Enjoy the waterfall you two!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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9 posted 2002-01-20 11:25 PM


*sigh* sweet romance...how I love it...I love waterfalls too...that is the perfect place for you to meet. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

poeticdreamer
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10 posted 2002-01-21 12:12 PM


Now this was so refreshing and cool to be given a look into your loving mind! poeticdreamer
poetryinmotion
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11 posted 2002-01-21 12:49 PM


hi Noah what a beautiful poem. so romantic. which waterfall is it?  because i'll be there waiting.  this is a very heart warming poem. love Alice
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12 posted 2002-01-21 02:04 AM


Beautiful imagery!!!!  The duck, duck, goose part was sooo cute, I loved it!!!!  Keep these love poems coming cause i just eat them up
:love ya:
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

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13 posted 2002-01-21 06:26 AM


Great romance here.
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14 posted 2002-01-21 09:11 AM


Oh Noah, how very beautiful. I am wishing i am at that waterfall to see all the beauty of it all. floria
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15 posted 2002-01-21 09:17 AM


how lovely and sooooo romantic. I truly enjoyed the tenderness within. Well done my dear romantic friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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16 posted 2002-01-21 09:34 AM


You sure can put it all together Noah
Excellent

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