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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-01-20 03:20 PM

White On White

Last night I finished painting my clouds,
visions above, this place where I sit.
Mind begins racing, accomplishment next,
celestial sphering, my future commit.

The heavens shall bring me the promise of gold.
Bearing each name, their footprints to pave.
Excitement is rising, as titles suggest,
The leo's, the pisces, tempt words to engrave.

This Moonchild's excited, her mood to extend
beyond her small world now, she's reaching for stars.
Attaining belief in a life of an after,
her smile has returned, healing those scars.

Last night I finished my clouds, white on white.
Today still on high, through the dark, I see light.

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

1 posted 2002-01-20 03:24 PM

Beautiful!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2002-01-20 03:27 PM

beyond her small world now, she's reaching for stars

Now, THAT, is completely wonderful, as well as the rest. Very good, Wynter, very good....very gentle smile

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-20 03:52 PM

I like the sound and feel of this VERY much

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

4 posted 2002-01-20 04:35 PM

Excellent imagery and feeling! Well done!

Love,
Bonnie

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

5 posted 2002-01-20 05:12 PM

how beautiful!!!!

Charisma

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-01-20 05:23 PM

Hi, nice to see you here again! This is beautiful, and sounds so positive and hopeful. If something special has inspired this, I am very happy for you.
Sandra

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2002-01-20 05:27 PM

This was so very beautiful and thoroughly enjoyed by this reader. Take care....Sue

Suetang

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-01-20 07:04 PM

nakdthoughts - very nice to see 'Moonchild' mentioned once again.

BC

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-01-20 11:50 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love the character your beautiful words create, the Moonchild! (kiss on cheek) May she forever guide you with her love and promise and take your heart to hope and happiness forever in your dreams and make them come true before your very eyes! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous and uplifting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

10 posted 2002-01-20 11:58 PM

Ihis is very innovative poetry, nakdthoughts.
Interesting contrasts of white and light throughout. ***Ivy Rose

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2002-01-21 06:57 AM

Silver Streak ..Why thank You!

Logan...long time, no see *s
It's nice to be smiling again.

Kathleen...sometimes life's tunes
are more upbeat. This is one of them.
hugsss (for your friendship)

Bonnie...happy you enjoyed *s

Charisma ...thank you *S

Sandra...hello there, trying to keep the positive flowing,
and the hopeful just tags along.
Glad to see you too..someday I may
take that trek up north and visit a few of you.

I have set some goals for myself,
this was all the inspiration I needed
to get myself out of the present situation ...
knowledge is everything Sandra. hugssss

Suetang ..I am happy you enjoyed,
Thank you. *

BC...the future's looking brighter and I love white on white.
*Moonchild* (for you).

Noah...Moonchild's no character, the rest of them are...she's the real deal *s
Thank you.

Ivy Rose...not sure whether it is innovative, but I am glad you enjoyed the contrasts.

Thank you All

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-21-2002 06:58 AM).]

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

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Up Creek w/Out Paddle

12 posted 2002-01-21 07:23 AM

A very nice sky, I'm sure! Now how about painting a brightly shining moon up there. It would be very appropriate. *s

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2002-01-21 07:42 AM

I may just do that..need to decide what phase I am in though *s...
hugsss
M

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2002-01-21 03:15 PM

Excellent...James

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2002-01-21 03:26 PM

Seems like your moonphase is one of strong
pull of romance...like the way you wrote
this poem...very nice..

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

16 posted 2002-01-21 03:33 PM

Last night I finished my clouds, white on white.
Today still on high, through the dark, I see light.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Maureen, this is wonderful. Nice to see you again, and being oh so positive!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

strbbux
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Posts 3859

17 posted 2002-01-21 03:35 PM

A beautiful picture you have painted, lovely. floria

Martie

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18 posted 2002-01-21 07:57 PM

"Last night I finished my clouds, white on white.
Today still on high, through the dark, I see light."

Beautiful!!

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

19 posted 2002-01-21 08:06 PM

This is just beautiful. I enjoyed reading this.

ctowen
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Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

20 posted 2002-01-21 08:25 PM

And I bet its Heaven!!!
Stars, moons, ... all good ideas
but what I would picture most
angel's with joyous tears!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

21 posted 2002-01-21 08:35 PM

JamesM...thank you

Magnus..I am a child of the moon *s
always a romantic, always of heart
thank you M


Nancy...I painted my ceiling white on white on white...now I will never have problems touching it up *s...and it looks like clouds above me. Thank You

M


Floria...thanks for the word *s

Martie..I appreciate your comment. *s

M

SmartChick..glad you enjoyed *s

Craig...yes I look up to heaven and then look forward to pen my thoughts...and you know what? I think I will paint a  moon and a few stars hidden within the clouds where only I can see them...and enjoy...
and an angels face here and there *s..thank you for the idea.
hugsss
M

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

22 posted 2002-01-21 09:08 PM

Wynter~

'celestial sphering'

Now THAT is creative beauty in thought~

You go girl ... I'm loving this~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

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on the horizon of a fairytale

23 posted 2002-01-21 10:06 PM

absolutely beautiful

Tim
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24 posted 2002-01-21 10:08 PM

Very nice, enjoyed your poem very much. Take care.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

25 posted 2002-01-22 07:00 AM

~*Marge*~ you are so sweet...thank you, and although I don't respond to each and every one of yours, please know I read all...and am following your happiness steps. *s
hugss
Maureen

A Whisper's Caress...thank you for the visit and words*s

Tim..appreciate your thoughts *s

Maureen

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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

26 posted 2002-01-22 08:22 AM

I enjoy your upbeat poems...looking forward to reading more hon..hugss

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

27 posted 2002-01-22 08:41 AM

thank you ~V~ I think today is the day to begin anew...it's amazing what a few helpful, caring words can do...oops I rhymed
without trying to.

hugsss
Maureen

Robert A
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Posts 174

28 posted 2002-01-22 03:14 PM

and this is real nice too, made me think of color and all of that. good poem

Robert

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

29 posted 2002-01-22 05:32 PM

you sure are a busy one today Robert..thanks for stopping by *s
It's always a pleasure to have you visit.

M

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