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Control Freak
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Control Freak |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Never tell, never tell No, I won't I can't and never will Tell you how I feel Then you'll know and take advantage I won't tell, I never will Go away, go away It would be foolish for you to stay I can't give back the things I lack In my heart and in my soul It's my game and it's my sin You'll never win I'm in control *note, I wrote this awhile ago and no longer feel like this. I've overcome that part of me when I found my husband. ;o) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Bonnie, I'm so happy that this doesn't apply to you now, this is sooooooo sadly written and I'm delighted that you now are happy with the love of your life! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* and now you and your husband are both in control in a much more delightful way.  Wonderful, honest writing..I loved reading it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
For those that want to stifle and control all you have to do is think of Tina and the success she made after booting her ex. Nicely said  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And now you know why it is important to keep your writings, so you can measure the distance of growth... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAH glad you found him Morc, nice poem. floria |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm bit of a control freak myself...it's a poor quality which I am trying to control!!  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Enjoyed! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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SavedbyGrace Junior Member
since 2002-01-16
Posts 36MA |
Been there, done that, Bonnie. Thanks for sharing -- this is well written and very honest. Traci  "For by grace are ye saved through faith; and that not of yourselves: it is the gift of God: not of works, lest any man should boast." |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great write, And glad to hear you found him, and that you do have control.. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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