Chariots of Passion (Duet with Victoria)

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Mistletoe Angel

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0 posted 2002-01-20 11:26 AM

Chariots of Passion
By: Victoria and Noah Eaton
1/20/02

Upon this enchanting chariot ride
an emperor and his empress of night
her dashing Caesar in roman moonlight
descending upon their lustrous eve
violins, trumpets, flutes, and bassoons
creep like love notes upon a moonlit wall
glissando tones against the vanilla moon
shoals of rose petals plait her hair
intoxicating essence, they came, they saw
an aura of radiance kisses their cheeks
sparrows embracing amethyst stars
leading white horses into freesia mist
guided by passion, conquered with a kiss
they gallop in an empire of total bliss

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-20-2002 11:27 AM).]

GenXer
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1 posted 2002-01-20 11:31 AM

Noah/Victoria - Well done. I could envision the chariot and the whitehorses fading into the mist. Very nice.

Dave

Morcastlin
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2 posted 2002-01-20 11:44 AM

As I read thisI too galloped into bliss! This is a beautiful read... sooooo romantic! I'm melting here!

Love,
Bonnie

brianbeaudry
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3 posted 2002-01-20 11:47 AM

Very romantic poem here you two....a magical journey into the tenderest of emotions...LOVE

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-01-20 11:50 AM

hmmmmm...I like very much..the combining of two romantic souls *s

~Wynter

Victoria

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5 posted 2002-01-20 12:09 PM

You have a very creative mind Noah dear..loved writing with you..hugs

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Larry C

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6 posted 2002-01-20 12:19 PM

Hey guys,
"guided by passion, conquered by a kiss"
Fun write...you're words flowed as one. Good job.

Victoria

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7 posted 2002-01-21 02:10 AM

thank you dave, brian, bonnie,wynter and larry..we appreciate your comments very much...hugs to all

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-01-21 04:33 AM

Yes that is the word...creative...James

Startime
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9 posted 2002-01-21 08:39 AM

BRAVO!!!This poem is wonderful. You two have painted a vision of pure magic. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
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10 posted 2002-01-21 09:07 AM

Noah this is wonderfully visual as usual. a lovely write, floria

Charisma

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11 posted 2002-01-21 09:24 AM

well done you two, like it very much

Charisma

Victoria

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12 posted 2002-01-21 02:40 PM

Thank you James and Karen
Floria and Charisma..it was a fun write. Noah and I both thank you for peeking in..

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Irish Rose
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13 posted 2002-01-21 09:42 PM

you two have done a marvelous job!
Congratulations! I'm impressed!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

14 posted 2002-01-22 12:49 PM

Wow, This poem is awesome, the two of you blend very well together. Thanks for sharing your talents with us.

DarkAngelChelle
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15 posted 2002-01-22 12:54 PM

Whew ... I am now a puddle on the floor, so I am having to use my very wits just to type. Everything about this piece is so flowing and romantic ... there is such a lovely, almost mystical quality. It reminds me almost of a fairytale, or a long ago legend. Well done!

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

16 posted 2002-01-22 01:08 AM

intoxicating essence, they came, they saw~

I liked that!! Nicely done you two.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2002-01-22 08:49 AM

Thank you all so much for your beautiful comments; me and Victoria had so much fun writing this together and she always write such beautiful words just as you all do! We all love you soooooooo much!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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18 posted 2002-01-23 11:45 AM

much enjoyed.......

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