Open Poetry #18 |
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Colorado |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(In the many salutes to the states that represent our nation, I now give you my patriotic tribute to the state I live in and love!!! ![]() Colorado By: Noah Eaton 1/18/02 Come to me where the purple mountain majesties sway Where the Rocky Mountains meet their pinnacle Where the song of O’ America was made A state of natural beauty and miracles We’ll start out west, where the dinosaurs once roamed In dry lands of ancient soils and fossils and functions Where the black canyons rise high over the plateau Way down south from Grand Junction Join me on the Silver Railroad We’ll see where the Anasazi lived in Mesa Verde We’ll live up on some old cowboy tales in Durango And stare out into the distance till the end of the day Now we’ll embrace the mountains that blanket our state Where the peregrine falcons fly Where the rivers dance flamenco and the crystal lakes hang Where our sweet little lynx friend is shy Where Buffalo Bill made route in his Pony Express Where the Mother Cabrini Shrine stands tall Where our wonderful bald eagle nests Where the valleys are braided with rainbow waterfalls Dare to race me down the alpine slide? How about we spend a nice night in a cabin in Breckenridge? Would you like to ski with me down the mountainside? How about a walk across the Royal Gorge Bridge? On to Denver now, where the Avalanche have the Stanley cup Where ice cream sodas were first made National Western Stock Shows are on and up Here between the majestic mountains and the golden plains Finally, come lie with me in these eastern plains Where it’s quiet and peaceful Where we get some nice comfortable rains Under bright morning skies of hazel Come join me in the state I live and love so true Our colorful Colorado, our Centennial State Where the Indian paintbrushes, columbines, and wild roses bloom Where the essence of nature comes out to play [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-18-2002 06:40 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - almost had a job in Colorada. A most beautiful state, and told how beautiful in your writing... BC |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
This was a beautiful journey Noah, mind if I retire there in a few years??!!! [This message has been edited by brianbeaudry (01-18-2002 06:46 PM).] |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"All my bags are packed I'm ready to go..." Leaving on a jet plane. It's an old tune, but one I can still sing. What a great travel trip through Colorado! See you soon. ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Noah! I think I'll hop on that flight with Kacy! Thanks for the beautiful tour of Colorado! Sounds like a wonderful state to live in or to visit. You did a magnificent job on this one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I hope Kacy and Nancy left a seat for me on that flight...because I, too...would love to take a trip to Colorado. Thanks for the beautiful poetic tour, Noah. It was very well done! ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Simply gorgeous Noah..i hope you show your english teacher some of your poems...i am not too far from Colorado..maybe one of these days i will see your beautiful state..HUGSS ~Victoria~ ![]() You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Noah, I don't get much of a chance to travel, so I have to thank you for this beautifully written poem. Through your words, I feel as if I was touring through Colorado right beside you. Thanks for the tour, my friend. Dawn |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I'd love to come visit you!! It sounds beautiful sweetie ![]() |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You painted a vivid portait of a place I would love to see someday. Sandra |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Yes Noah! Our state sure is special in many ways. This reminded me of what a great state Colorado really is. Great poem Noah, I really liked this one. From your good friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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srsmith25 Junior Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 22Indiana |
Wow! What a great poem! I have never been to Colorado, but I can picture what its like with the words of your poem. Sounds like a beautiful place. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Noah, We used to go camping in Colorado when I was a kid. I loved it. You've brought it all back to me. ![]() Nan |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Noah, You've described your state so beautifully, no wonder everyone is thinking about coming to visit! *smiles* This is an excellent poem. luv, ~Tier ps, Ever think about writing for vacation magazines? *wink* |
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