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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-01-18 01:04 PM



If


If you can give of your best whenever it’s asked of you
If you can stand and face yourself square and true
If you can look to the future and don’t look back
If you can give strength to others without fear or lack
If you can call out to you friend well done, well done
And not seek to bask in the glories of the race they’ve run
If you can be all that you can and live in harmony
You will understand life’s wonder and live in beauty

If you can walk straight and tall when you need to do
If you can run the distance when your strength is through
If you can sing when the road ahead turns rough
If you can give love always giving more than enough
If you can stand still and not moan and whine
And even when you’re not say to your friend I’m fine
If you can be all that and are willing to take more
You will never feel desperate or feel heart sore

If you can go forward and not seek to procrastinate
If you can accept all that happens as your destined fate
If you can seek wisdom but not desire to be too wise
If you can see truth and never seek to cover up lies
If you can be all that you can and never give in
And know that it’s the race not whether you win
If you can see beauty and feel it touch within you
Then you will live in love your whole life through

Marsha



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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1 posted 2002-01-18 01:08 PM


My library will never be too full for such a wonderful piece as this, I love it!
Happy Birthday week. We are all lucky that you are part of this family.

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2 posted 2002-01-18 01:21 PM


If I could be all things that you mention
Without selfish pride or wrong intention
I would be much like Chist, it's very true
So as I walk and learn to talk with you,

I'll set my goal. Learn to write as you do.

You're poem is wonderful, Marsha! -Silver Streak  

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3 posted 2002-01-18 01:22 PM




YAY!!! (smiles) Yes, if we always believe in ourselves and if we go forward, sing, accept these words of wisdom, and laugh and cheer, we will find true happiness in all of life! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! HAPPY MARSHA'S BIRRHDAY WEEK!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-18 01:32 PM


You said it,
and you said it well

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2002-01-18 01:49 PM


I don't know why your poems
always show up so tiny but
they are sure worth increasing
the font to read!!!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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6 posted 2002-01-18 02:58 PM


Marsha , a terrific poem so lovely. floria
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7 posted 2002-01-18 06:19 PM


Midnitesun darling heart thank you so very much I’ve actually been working on this poem for a little while. I simply couldn’t get it to end I don’t know why that is I’m sure but it simply wouldn’t fall into place. Today I opened my unfinished file and it whispered to me saying work on me. I’m glad I did

And I’m glad you like it too


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

[This message has been edited by Marsha (01-19-2002 09:27 AM).]

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8 posted 2002-01-18 06:20 PM


Silver Streak darling boy thank you muchly I can always rely on you to be biased in my favour. YOU always say such nice things to me

and I appreciate you hugely



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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9 posted 2002-01-18 06:21 PM


Noah darling boy thank you so muchly YOU are a living joy to this place and I know there are countless souls who are as blessed by presence as I am.

Shine on darling boy for you are pure sunshine


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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10 posted 2002-01-19 08:50 AM



I would say Kipling would be right proud of this piece from you to add to his...

IF, indeed! You're one special gal, no IFs ands or buts about it!

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11 posted 2002-01-27 01:07 AM


Interloper darling boy thank you so very much You are always so sweet to me thank you. YOU are special you know.

However I really must apologise to Rudyard Kipling, I’m sure if he knew of this he’d be spinning in his grave, I only hope he doesn’t come and haunt me.  


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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12 posted 2002-01-27 01:08 AM


Kathleen darling girl thank you so very very much. That is one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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13 posted 2002-01-27 01:09 AM


Floria darling girl thank you so very very much you are without doubt one of the sweetest souls here, it is a pleasure to read your kind words. Thank you always I appreciate your support.  


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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14 posted 2002-01-27 01:12 AM


Kari darling sister of my soul thank you so very very much. That is one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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