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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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0 posted 2002-01-02 04:15 PM

We made love beneath the silk veil of the moon
misty shadows waltzing beside a blue lagoon
we made love that ended much too soon
impatient sands of time could not pretend
upon parchment lips our love was penned
we made love within the silhouettes of night
to soft whispers of jasmine moonlight
we made love upon satin wings of no return
until ravished skin became moonlight burned
we made love as our kisses interlaced
now my thoughts nest in an imaginary place
we made love to the calligraphy of hearts race
bathing within the waves, no footprints to trace
we made love, lost within the moon's embrace

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-02-2002 05:08 PM).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-01-02 04:21 PM

Once again, Victoria, I'll have whatever you're having!

Lovely and softly romantic...and making love that ends much too soon? DON'T I KNOW IT!!!

lol...enjoyed the read, hope you have a wonderful new year!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-02 04:34 PM

OOOOOOOOO WOW!!!!!!!!! I want some of this too.....now if only I can find a man who want it just as much as I do. MAGNIFICENT. I LOVE IT!!!**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

3 posted 2002-01-02 04:37 PM

Victoria - I need to find the moon you are talking about

, because the one by me isn't as good as the one you describe in this romantic write. Nicely done.

Dave

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

4 posted 2002-01-02 05:05 PM

Making love almost always ends way too soon doesn't it. Very soft and sensuous poem Victoria.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-01-02 05:12 PM

Vic, this is stunning. I don't know if I can bear it being only a memory to me.
Sandra

AndiePandie
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since 2002-01-01

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6 posted 2002-01-02 05:24 PM

Beautiful imagry and lovely poem.

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2002-01-02 05:44 PM

We made love beneath the silk veil of the moon
misty shadows waltzing beside a blue lagoon
we made love that ended much too soon
impatient sands of time could not pretend
upon parchment lips our love was penned
we made love within the silhouettes of night
to soft whispers of jasmine moonlight
we made love upon satin wings of no return
until ravished skin became moonlight burned
================================

Victoria...this is so very lovely...the imagery and the passionate inspire...
so many poetically pretty phrases wrapped in rhyme divine...So good to read your image rich words again, glad to see you back.
Happy New Year.

"Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars much too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night."

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-01-02 07:59 PM

(smiles) MMMMMMMMMM...I LOVE IT! (sigh) SOOOOOOOOOO GORGEOUS!!! I dream ever so much of loving the girl of my dreams under the jasmine moon forever! (sigh) Oh my gosh, you are so inspiring, this is romance at its loveliest! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2002-01-02 08:32 PM

Thank you all very much for your kind comments...i truly appreciate each and everyone of you ...

hugss

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Balladeer

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10 posted 2002-01-02 09:38 PM

That's a lot of lovemaking!!!...and beautiful moments. These are wonderful descriptions, Sandra

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2002-01-02 09:41 PM

haa...thank you Ralph haa

to many hot toddies huh

~Vic

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thepoeticplumber
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since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

12 posted 2002-01-02 09:48 PM

You circle love in so many delightful and caring ways. It was my pleasure to read of each. Roger

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2002-01-02 09:57 PM

Wow....delightful write Victoria!
Lot of love making going on in here tonight...
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

14 posted 2002-01-02 10:44 PM

Now I know why I love the moon so much

'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

15 posted 2002-01-02 10:50 PM

You and your images are so perfectly penned.
The feelings are so delicate and the scenery is so delightful and poetic.

Loved the love in this Victoria!!

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

16 posted 2002-01-02 11:16 PM

Victoria~

The sensual images in this.....a keeper for sure....

Happy New Year my friend~

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

17 posted 2002-01-02 11:26 PM

The soul, the body, and the mind come together - earthly trinity touching all with its light.

Beautiful, Victoria.

jwesley

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

18 posted 2002-01-02 11:41 PM

Quite powerful ...
the moon shares a great power with you.
I could feel wave after wave of moonlight
crashing from an endless ocean upon me..
breathtaking!!
Well done!!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

19 posted 2002-01-03 12:05 PM

Thank you all for your lovely comments tonight and thank you for peeking in..

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

20 posted 2002-01-03 12:50 PM

What can I say? I loved it!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

21 posted 2002-01-03 01:26 AM

Very romantic Victoria...James

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

22 posted 2002-01-03 09:18 AM

Thank you Eddie and James...love hearing from both of you...

~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

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NC,USA

23 posted 2002-01-03 10:53 AM

Victoria,very beautiful!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

24 posted 2002-01-03 11:03 AM

Victoria, so soft and just so pretty and delightful. You have a way with words that makes mere words a pleasure to read. Wonderful hon!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

25 posted 2002-01-03 01:14 PM

Juanita and Donna thank you for peeking in today...have a great new year!

~Vic

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