The Cruel Of Time (In Wait For Fate)

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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2002-01-16 01:21 PM

The Cruel Of Time
(In Wait For Fate)

Though we're meant to embrace
time refuses fate,
another life sees your face
before a lover's gate.
The day will come when you are mine
almost when it's far too late
when earth and sky are divine
will you shine as my soulmate.

But, until I hold that hour
my dreams will dip in stupid
filling heart with sour
from the bow of Cupid.

The tick of time is standing still
to test the strength of my core
the cruel of yearn leaves eyes in spill
knowing that there's something more.
I wake each morn in misery
and, I breathe in, breathe out;
Though you live, there's uncertainty
shrouding faith in doubt.

Down this lonely path, I plod
hiding from my past
on bended knee, I beg of God
to lavish you at last.
The moon will sing when you are mine
when sighs do soothe and satiate
when real and fantasies align
will you shine as my soulmate.

But, until I hold that hour
I'll waste in worried wait,
starved to taste the power
from the fruits of fate

By Melissa P. Monette

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-16 01:23 PM

Boy, what feelings of expectancy and love.

Seems like everyone has cabin fever these days
especially when we are separated from someone we love.....

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-01-16 01:26 PM

OMIGOSH! I MISS YOUR WORK! This is sooo lovely, Honeybee!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-16 01:31 PM

Melissa this is so beautiful and so well written .floria

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-16 02:10 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Melissa, I know just how you feel, I am in love with the most beautiful girl I could ever dream of, but we live far apart and need to wait for time to bring us tohether if our love is true! (sigh) Love will come to your heart soon, sweet friend, then the moon and angels will sing for you everyday in your happiness forever and you will be flooding with love poems! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you truly are a Queen of Romance! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-01-16 02:38 PM

Oh gosh....the yearning in this poem is so powerful...I hope the wait is not long before you can embrace your soulmate. This is a beautiful poem. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2002-01-16 09:04 PM

missy,

this is both saddening
and lovely in it's content
and flow...well written

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-01-16 09:12 PM

Wonderful capture here of great longing....
well done Melissa!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2002-01-16 10:28 PM

you get better with every reading Melissa. . . this just flows like water down the page. . .

wonderful from the Queen of Romance. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-01-17 10:27 AM

So good, and so in tune with my emotions,(as usual)

"The moon will sing when you are mine
when sighs do soothe and satiate
when real and fantasies align
will you shine as my soulmate.

But, until I hold that hour
I'll waste in worried wait,
starved to taste the power
from the fruits of fate"

Those words.wow..you know I could have said them myself.
Sandra

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (01-17-2002 10:28 AM).]

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

10 posted 2002-01-17 11:41 AM

You have portrayed the longing here well.You have done a great job.
Peaches

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

11 posted 2002-01-19 12:20 PM

Melissa,
Ahhhh.....Unrequited love, yet HOPE lives!
Good write and I loved your rhyming scheme here. Dennis :^)

painly-
Junior Member

since 2002-01-18

Posts 10

12 posted 2002-01-19 01:29 PM

wow, this gave me some great emotions, and brought me back some memories

thanks
painly

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

13 posted 2002-01-19 01:54 PM

VERY, VERY NICE!!!!!! Wonderful rhyming causes this poem to soar!!! ****Ivy Rose

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

14 posted 2002-01-19 02:16 PM

beautiful......

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

15 posted 2002-01-20 08:56 PM

Melissa,
Wonderful.....and you've touched on precisely how badly we long for our dreams to come true. THIS poem is a dream come true!
Love, Elise

Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

16 posted 2002-01-20 09:09 PM

Melissa...I know these feelings all too well also. I am impatiently awaiting my love of 13 years to come back home so that we can resume our lives. Thank you for sharing...and remember that no matter how sad, no matter how deep we feel, there is always a tomorrow...Rod

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

17 posted 2002-01-20 09:14 PM

One fine day we will reach our fate
and time will no longer matter.
In the meantime we are left in the passing.

Your thoughts were heartfelt, and touching.

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

18 posted 2002-01-20 09:26 PM

Yes, waiting for the moment you can confess your feelings is a cruel wait indeed.
It is lovely Melissa.

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

19 posted 2002-01-20 09:29 PM

Waiting for the time you can confess your feelings is a cruel wait.
Your words are lovely.

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