Open Poetry #18 |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
My heart has been closed and in need of major repairs since you walked out on me without ever looking back Did you not want to see the hurt in my eyes or did you not want to hear my cries as I pleaded with you to stay Nothing was going to keep you here You had already made up your mind but I don't think you could foresee how damaging your departure would be My feelings had become unimportant to you I became a thorn in your side excess baggage totally superfluous no longer required My emotional scars will heal in time but I remain determined to become a stronger person as I refuse to let love defeat me So much love I have to give but so carefully I will choose as to where I plant my seeds of love in order to reap the rewards and receive the love I believe I deserve Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) So sad but hopeful, sweet friend, the beauty of love is all about planting the seeds in the right heart and harvesting to the right time, for where you find the most beautiful sunshine of love, is where eternity will sprout and all your wounds and worries will disappear into happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, all our hearts go out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* My heart goes out to you, dear one. I know that when you do plant your seeds of love your garden will blossom and burst with the purest fruit of love. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A very heart wrenching poem Sue, but extremely well done. ~* CARPE' DIEM *~ |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Oh Sue, Such feeling in this poem. Very, very emotional. Filled with heartbreak and finishing with determination. A fine way you use your words my friend. Roger |
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poetryinmotion Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 61mass |
hi Sue. what a wonderful poem. sad but wonderful. the way you wrote this poem brought tears to my eyes. i felt the pain through your words. when a poem can get to the heart of a person then that means the writer is a great writer. love Alice |
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