Open Poetry #18 |
Talk Me Into The Night - for Mysteria |
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Talk me into the Night I balk at the shadows closing in the memories don't walk when they come rushing in the hurting is chalked up to experience once again and I know to caulk the windows of my soul from the wind ~ * ~ * ~ so talk me into the night, my friend walk with me in soft light, no end of talk throughout the night to lend a shoulder on which I might cry hold me and hug me tonight and then talk a little more my friend then whisper that there shall be an end Willow won't break, just continue to sigh sing to me a silent song all night and caress away all of the fright then never again let loose of tight just talk me into the long goodbye just talk to me, my friend ~ * ~ * ~ 8 December 2000 revised 15 January 2002 |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is a beautiful poem for Mysteria, Karilea. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is beautiful sunshine, I love it, floria |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Carefully and thoughtfully crafted as usual. Very well written as usual! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, I just know our sweet Sharon will love this, just as I know Willow is right now smiling upon her and you, so happy to see such these lovely words written from your golden heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Lovely! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah my friend, a lovely write...again jwesley |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Karilea - Great opening stanza. It is definitely nice to have someone to talk to, to help us forget painful memories. Very good. Dave |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Karilea, God bless you for you have indeed comforted me this night. I have printed this out,and will whisper these words when needed, over and over again. Thank you seems hardly enough, and I am truly humbled with this giving. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You share a true friends heart when you reach out in such a way and bring her comfort from the touch of your words. I love this poem and am greatful that it helped bring comfort to her heart like she is always giving to us all. **big big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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