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Springtime of your Touch
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Springtime of your Touch |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I feel like a cherry blossom in the winter waiting for the springtime of your touch a tea rose in bloom, sweet as a honeymoon you can say you love me in English or Dutch Speak to me in Italian, French or Chinese Greek or German, Russian or Lebanese tell me you love me on a bungee or knees Just tell me.. Just tell me.. Will you please? Let my fingers massage your temples of gray with each kiss I can make a kissable bouquet He loves me..He loves me not.. Love me I pray let us swirl together like creamy sorbet I am waiting for the springtime of your touch Just A blossom patiently waiting to blush. "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so beautifully written...I hope he says what you want to hear...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Beautiful....simply beautiful!!!!I love the use of the seasons as catalyst for romance. I feel like a cherry blossom in the winter waiting for the springtime of your touch Loved these lines!!! Words expressed without deception...Are the beginning of a poem's conception |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Well if he says Te Amo that will be i love you in spanish I like this very much RP |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a catchy tune you sing. Not asking for so much, are we? Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Karen..thank you but its just a poem hon it was fun writing..hugss Brian..Welcome to Passions..thank you for your sweet reply..happy you enjoyed Joanna..yes i wish i could have used all the languages in the universe ha..glad you enjoyed..hugs Sandra..thank you for peeking in hon..no we are not are we? ha...  "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." ~ David Viscott [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-14-2002 08:57 PM).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Well, I'd say you did it again... very nice. Love gray temples....mmmm... that and nice forearms, a man's gotta have nice forearms. Oh yeah and nice eyes, and a great smile and did I say nice forearms? great writing once again. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Annie..and dont forget nice teeth haa...and nice earlobes ha...silly me..  [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-16-2002 04:14 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...and nice sexy eyes, and kissable lips and...lol...great write Victoria! Now you have my mind a wanderin' too. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Victoria - Truly a very good, smooth, romantic write with an international flavor.lol The last two lines capped it off beautifully. Nicely done. Dave |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Victoria, this is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, you always write such gorgeous words of love and joy! (kiss on cheek) May true love come to your heart and forever shine with springs symphony in your heart and warm you with happiness! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
He loves me..He loves me not.. Love me I pray Oh the springtime is so sweet and new when the blush is blooming in all it's glory. This was so very pretty Victoria~ |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
victoria, this is very pretty with good rhythm and catchy descriptions, I really enjoyed this! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the flow and imagery of this one, Victoria... Very lovely, indeed!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Ms.Serenade..thank you so much for your sweet comments..nice to hear from you tonight  Chelsea...thank you..i have a niece named Chelsea too...thanks for peeking in Madame..thank you..always nice to hear from you .. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Victoria,I enjoyed this very much and here is a flower for you.But if anyone tells me they love me I sure hope its in English.    Juanita |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Juanita..i will take it in any language..haa i love accents haa ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
this is great, Victoria. You know I'm reading to get inspired right? Well, it's not working and do you know why? Cause you women are so gorgeous. Do you know I was blind when I signed on here, and now, why now, hell I can see clearly now..... thanks!Robert |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you for those lovely compliments Robert..and i hope we certainly did inspire you to write..looking forward to reading your words.. ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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