Open Poetry #18 |
Raging River of Ink |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
My fountain pen travels like a raging river flowing with dolor clouds and melancholy skies sometimes it flows with free verse and rhyme in fables of pink, lemon golds and lime in ballads of purple, and legends of plums flowing with scarlet roses and birds that hum Enchanting ink flows over large boulders over banks and beneath weeping willow trees stops to admire a water lily rushes past melodious bumble bees aquamarine ink flows and will not meet the final point of no return scribbles along the Colorado river Never to dry..Nor to blot..No.. Not ever You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! (smiles) Oh my gosh, your loving hearts pen always creates the most beautiful imagery, you truly are our Queen of Imagery! (kiss on cheek) Your loving words always take me on such exciting adventures into your heart, I love it!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend, the colors of poetry shine in you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely done! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* stunning visions you painted with the brilliance of your pen. I love them..keep the river raging with ink. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
hey hey, that's how I feel sometimes, like the ink is just flowing and raging....and yours is doing wonderfully. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
noah..those little smiles are so cute..where are you finding some of them..some must be new..cause i havent seen them..thanks dear noah..for peeking in ethome..thank you so much for visiting ethome..glad you enjoyed.. karen..thank you very much karen..happy to hear from you as always kathleen..im glad you feel like that too hon..i know i love your raging river of words You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Victoria , a wonderful write about your pen. I love this. floria |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Victoria,lots of beautiful colors from your pen. Juanita |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Victoria, What a wonderful river of rainbow dreams painting your poetic scenes. Very nice. Reminds me of a painting by my favorite artist Jim Warren, called "Natures Little Helper". Here is the URL - http://www.aejv.com/war-p26.htm Roger |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Juanita...nice to hear from your today..as always... floria thank you for peeking in. Roger..thank you and the painting is just gorgeous of that little girl in a rainbow of colors..loved it.. he is a wonderful painter |
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