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a corny proposal
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a corny proposal |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
Ok, I'm down on bended knee asking will you marry me? I've made the calls and turned away the women who held love at bay. I love you, will you please affirm the fire that deep within me burns. Come on, let's go, my plane awaits I'll take you far to heaven's gates. We'll take your son, the three of us we'll ride the ferris wheel in trust. I'm just a simple man but hon your heart please tell me I have won. Just let me be your hero, dear I'll carry you forever, near. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
What a proposal! Hope she says yes! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!! I hope she jumps into your arms, covers you with kisses and through the tears in her eyes says YES!!!**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How could she refuse such an offer? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Robert, She must say yes, accept no buts, Otherwise this lady is nuts. So look her straight into the face, I'm sure your life she will embrace. And when the knot is tied, When everyone has finally cried. Tell us all the gritty details, That's the rules of poetry tales. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
How could one refuse such a wonderful offer! Good luck and God Bless! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
THIS is precious, the line about the ferris wheel, Gosh, I love this. You have a plane? yes, by all means let us know, play by play we all live for this stuff. My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How could she say no? Please keep us informed! Show her this poem...she just won't refuse! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Such a great write. I cannot see how anyone could resist the offer! You deserve it, because you have such a beautiful heart. Good luck, even though I don't think you need it. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh tell me this is true..and tell me she says yes! Sweet and sweepingly romantic! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Now that's a proposal! Good luck! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Love may always sound like a corny proposal, but as long as we believe in ourselves, it truly is always the most beautiful feeling! (smiles) Tell her how you feel, for with a loving heart like yours, the girl of your dreams will be so ahppy to fall into your arms and scream with rapture in heavenly bliss to have you forever! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
now I really feel awful. took me all this time to get back here and thank you nice people for the words. Hey, I'm trying here! This is not real yet, I'm still working on it, Women! I mean ...ah women! Robert |
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