Open Poetry #18 |
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Red Wolf's Heart |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Red Wolf, Cherokee maiden, laughs into the wind allowing the wind to play with her silken tresses. She gathers her red skirts in soft, draping folds all about her. Her red blouse decorated with beads of many colors. Her long black lashes winking at the temerity of the wind. "Yes," she says, "My blood runs red, fills me with adventure, wild desires." Many young braves follow her paths leaving gifts upon the ground, wooing her with songs of great longing, desperate need. Red Wolf runs along the rivers of their hearts leaving them in the dust ~~~~of their own yearning. Like a Red Wolf~~~~ she consumes all of their passions, caring nothing about the many hearts that she leaves shattered, the dreams that she has broken into shards. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) WOW!!! Such a powerfully bittersweet Native American legend come to life, sweet friend, both passion and tears fill these words! May Red Wolf continue to dance but only bring passion and comfort to many hearts! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, the visions you paint are absolutely breathtaking and incredible! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
I think I met this maiden once in the forest of my dreams. What a challenge. ![]() -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! Ivy...this one is absolutely magnificent....shoot... I know I say that about them all but this one is outstanding. I love it. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Ivy Rose this was delightful to me as I have a fried who is native american. this was really wonderful. floria |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent work with wonderful imagery, Ivy Rose. Enjoyed! ![]() All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ All the Native passion and fire~ 'Red Wolf runs along the rivers of their hearts leaving them in the dust ~~~~of their own yearning.' Just WONDERFUL~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
liked this very much I could see her easily arthur |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh! i like this one alot..nicely done ivy rose as always...one of my favorites.. ![]() ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Such a strong and powerful piece of poetry! I could envision it all so well! When I read this, I saw her being wild and free! Excellent writing! |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Such a strong and powerful piece of poetry! I could envision it all so well! When I read this, I saw her being wild and free! Excellent writing! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
enjoyed this one, Ivy. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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