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No Love At This Address
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No Love At This Address |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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When did you last tell me you loved me? When did my heart last skip a beat? How long ago were we both consumed by passion? And basked in love's glorious heat? My mind tries to resurface these memories But they seem to be lost in the fray Oh how I long to hear 'I love you' I wish you could say theses words today You used to live deep inside my heart The place you took as your new address How easily I would succumb Whenever I felt your warm caress But like an ember that has died in the fire So have the sparks between me and you There's such an incredible amount of distance And love has all but faded from view The bridges of love have been broken You no longer seem to care how I feel Unlike when the time I first met you When so easily was my heart yours to steal In denial am I as I sit here All alone as I stare into space No love remains here in this cabin Was I to blame for this gradual fall from grace? Suetang |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Such sadness here.I'm sure if any of it was your fault it wasn't solely yours.It takes two to make it and two to brake it.I hope you will be happy soon. Peaches |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, this is so so sad, I know deep down that it wasn't your fault just as it wasn't his, it's just this love wasn't true or meant to be, but I know deep down with all my heart everyone has a true love, and will forever be a resident of anothers heart with a permanent happiness address! (kiss on cheek) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we al love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I am moved. I am in awe. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautifully written Sue..a sad one indeed..hugss.. ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
 i'm sorry that things aren't working out. Love will reside at your address again when you meet the right person. (HUGS)RP |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts...I believe love is lost when admiration and appreciation is not a priority in a relationship...James |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is sad and bittersweet Suetang, a really nice write, emotional. floria |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
A very sad poem Sue, this is quite a turn-around from your usual love filled ones. I do hope it is fiction you have penned, and penned very well I might add.Hugz dear friend!!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Exceptional writing Sue, and on a topic I am sure so many can identify with, very poignant. ~* CARPE' DIEM *~ |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Boy Sue, was that a different kind of write for you. It was so full of rejection. You wrote it in such a convincing way too. I was frightened, nervous and anxious. Great job, your friend, Roger PS: Tell me it's not so [This message has been edited by thepoeticplumber (01-15-2002 06:47 PM).] |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Sue, sadly heartbreaking but well expressed. You know you've done a great job of writing if all of your friends are concerned and think this is a personal piece. Well written either way. Cheryl |
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